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DarkRainfire In reply to Umikah [2016-05-11 07:50:48 +0000 UTC]
Hmm... okay, here goes (TBH, the bit before it is the most intense bit but it's also very sensitive if you can guess...)
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Thouar visibly tensed up but kept his voice level, much to Aiden’s admiration. “Depression is no joke, Rodney. It is not something you can laugh at, it is not something you can just get over. And it is definitely something you can’t just back-talk about. I thin--”
“Ah, so you’re one of those people,” Rodney cut in aggressively. He moved so that he stood in front of the pale boy, towering over the smaller black haired loner. “One of those people who believe that the world is kind and caring and that there is a good and decent reason behind everything. Tsk. You know what? I really detest people like you. You’re all so weak and you all try to make yourselves feel better by coming up with excuses when the truth is.”
He jabbed Thouar in the chest with a finger.
“Life is cruel and you guys”
Again.
“Just.”
Again.
“Can’t”
And again
“Handle it.”
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That's all I'm going to show. :V
And yeah! I fully agree on that point! You can set up the situations easier and then topple them so much easier QwQ
But Deadpool also regenerates at the same rate he decomposes while Gui doesn't seem to have any healing abilities?
Doesn't that mean he'll eventually just be a bunch of bones? O.O
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Umikah In reply to DarkRainfire [2016-05-11 15:10:21 +0000 UTC]
No, i mean, well.. umm... how to explain... The holes he has in him body will always be there, they wont ever go, that's just cos i like them, no other reason. I may now and then draw him with other eroded areas, like on his face, his ears or maybe even his eyes or tail, this is cos the acid has got to that area and burnt away his flesh, BUT, it will heal up, however, it happens over a certain amount of time and itotallyjustexplaineditwrong... YOU THINK TOO MUCH... STOP THINKING... BAD RAINFIRE! XD
And omg, Rodney is a fricken ass... I LOVE IT!
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DarkRainfire In reply to Umikah [2016-05-12 09:07:30 +0000 UTC]
Pfft, but PHILOSOPHY!! Thinking too much comes in my educational curriculum! Blame my teachers!!!
And if it helps, maybe you could say that the acid isn't actually very corrosive? That would mean that the outer layer of the skin, which is mostly dead skin cells (as we all should know cause science), wouldn't really be affected as much, while the insides would be just corroded through as our innards are WAY more sensitive.
Does that sound correct?
And thank you! TwT
He actually grows worse as the story goes on but... I haven't written those bits out properly >.>
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Umikah In reply to DarkRainfire [2016-05-13 16:22:10 +0000 UTC]
Pff, short story of milo's with bad punctuation and rushed writing goes something like:
Milo's mother is ill and in a coma and all dat jazz
Milo is severely bullied
He dreams about a group of demons
They say that if he gives them 3 souls, they will heal his mother, so he sells his own soul along with his best friend, Ash's and a good friend Mican, but that was an accident, it's a long story...
He wakes up, thinking it is a dream, but gets a call to say his mother has woken up from her coma, and rushes to the hospital to find she is better.
Milo is confused that he is still alive, after all, he has just sold his soul.
He goes to bed and the next day, gets told one of the boys who bullied him has been brutally murdered. He starts getting flashbacks and finds out he murdered him.
Milo has la breakdown.
Milo gets punched by Ash because he admits to selling ashes soul.
Milo gets told by the demons in his dreams that one of the demons is now part of him, and that Milo didn't kill the boy, 'Glitch' did. Who is a character who's: genetics, looks, personality, whatever you call it, is a mixture of the demons and Milo's. If Milo hates someone, Glitch hates them more, if Milo loves someone... well, that could end seriously badly! He also gets told Glitch isn't triggered by Milo being angry or anything, its merely random, but Milo can learn to control it.
Fact is, Milo is crap at controlling it... However, he learns to watch when Glitch is on a rampage, meaning he can see what glitch is doing so that he can remember what has happened when he becomes Milo again.
Milo gets a ring from the hospital saying his mother had a turn for the worst and died.
Milo is furious, and of course sad. He meets up with the demons again, and yell at them for breaking their promise.
Thais basically it so far... But it's now a little further in the future. I'm thinking of adding one more demon to the story, so one more character, but i dunt wanna make another 'paradise lost' oc. My real life friend owns Mican yu see!
AND IM TERRIBLE AT SCIENCE! Im not exactly the brightest of people! ^^' Art, food tech and coding is my kinda thing! I luv to bake! Maths is ok, i guess, but i'm not exactly amazing at it! :I
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DarkRainfire In reply to Umikah [2016-05-14 07:38:53 +0000 UTC]
OOOOOHHHHHHH!!!!
Okay. I'm REALLY interested now. QwQ
I need more! MORE!!
And hahahaha, its okay mate, same over here
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Umikah In reply to DarkRainfire [2016-05-14 10:24:15 +0000 UTC]
I HAVE NO MOREEEEE!!! TAKE MY MONEY!!! AAHHH
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DarkRainfire In reply to Umikah [2016-05-14 11:44:19 +0000 UTC]
NOOOOOO
*throws money back at you*
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Nightfeather123 [2016-05-06 17:32:56 +0000 UTC]
he's beautiful WoaW literally this is the coolest character I've ever seen no kidding mist gimme ur shempai skills pls >:000000 this IS STUNN N IN G
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FIamesong [2016-05-06 12:59:30 +0000 UTC]
STAP MAKING COOL CHARACTERS MISTEH ><
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Umikah In reply to FIamesong [2016-05-06 14:34:18 +0000 UTC]
SAYS THE PERSON WHO'S CHARACTER DESIGNS ARE JUST THE BEST!! XD
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FIamesong In reply to Umikah [2016-05-06 17:02:52 +0000 UTC]
1 NA THEY ARE NOT!
2 THEY ARE NORMAL OWO
YOURS ARE TOO EPIC FOR MAH BRAIN
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Umikah In reply to FIamesong [2016-05-07 08:44:58 +0000 UTC]
Pfff, your designs are totally awesome tho, trust meh!!!
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FIamesong In reply to Umikah [2016-05-07 14:24:50 +0000 UTC]
But not as cool as yours are oWo
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Umikah In reply to FIamesong [2016-05-07 14:48:10 +0000 UTC]
Hey, we should collab a pair of oc's or something? Like, i do the lines (As im better with oc ideas then color) and you do the color (Cos your oc pelt colors are just perfect!! <3)
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FIamesong In reply to Umikah [2016-05-08 09:01:40 +0000 UTC]
Of course! oWo
My family is going hiking today, so I don't have time ;W; *whispers save meeeeeeh*
But I'll note you as soon as I'm back! C:
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Umikah In reply to FIamesong [2016-05-08 09:27:25 +0000 UTC]
Ok (I have to go on week hiking holidays every term, so i feel your pain! XD)
And sure thing, i shall wait for dat! X'D
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FIamesong In reply to Umikah [2016-05-10 16:44:24 +0000 UTC]
Owgersh *hugglez*
I can't stand a day XD
Got time now oWo
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Umikah In reply to FIamesong [2016-05-10 18:26:31 +0000 UTC]
Yay wait, what were we talking about again? XD
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FIamesong In reply to Umikah [2016-05-10 19:10:46 +0000 UTC]
About the collab OCs X'D
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FIamesong In reply to Umikah [2016-05-15 16:46:38 +0000 UTC]
I don't care ^^
What ever you prefer C:
no problem mah friend *hugs*
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alliscylla [2016-05-06 01:00:21 +0000 UTC]
He's so cool :3
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alliscylla In reply to Umikah [2016-05-06 19:50:19 +0000 UTC]
You're welcome ::3
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Nightbird1648 [2016-05-05 22:26:23 +0000 UTC]
Oh my gosh! He's so pretty! I'd like to RP if you want...
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lotusfang89 [2016-05-05 21:16:05 +0000 UTC]
ooh he looks nice! ^^
im up for a rp over notes if you want to Umi! (im okay with rating over 15+ ^^)
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lotusfang89 In reply to Umikah [2016-05-06 15:30:53 +0000 UTC]
Alright ^w^!
(My oc is called Eclipse dark grey wolf with orange stripes red paws and tail tip and wings and green eyes ^^)
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Umikah In reply to DragonflyBee [2016-05-06 14:35:16 +0000 UTC]
Thank you so much!
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swerpeeyo [2016-05-05 20:39:53 +0000 UTC]
What do you mean no more characters? They're so gorgeous, especially this one! I love how the acid is corrosive and burning through him woahhh
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Umikah In reply to swerpeeyo [2016-05-06 14:35:38 +0000 UTC]
Ahhh, Thank you so much, that is so nice of you!!!!! <3
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o3o-TsunSavy-o3o [2016-05-05 20:25:17 +0000 UTC]
I wuvs him....and if ya wanna rp i have a Fursona in make that is a "WonderLand Wolf" basicly a weird wolf xDDD and her name is "Sakuran" Confusion in japanese uvu might make a ref for her SOMEDAY
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Umikah In reply to o3o-TsunSavy-o3o [2016-05-06 14:36:04 +0000 UTC]
Yeah, id love to Rp! Would you like to start then?
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o3o-TsunSavy-o3o In reply to Umikah [2016-05-06 14:45:10 +0000 UTC]
Sure! Lemme think of a good start uvu also Notes or Comments? or wherever that has nothing to be with the phone or facebook xD
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o3o-TsunSavy-o3o In reply to Umikah [2016-05-06 14:58:01 +0000 UTC]
OK!
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Sakuran was practicing a bit of her confusion magic behind a tree with a rabbit on it. She tried to hypnotise the rabit for him to kill another rabbit, she was still not making it. Her goal wasen't that far still she just needed practice.
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Rainyee [2016-05-05 20:20:48 +0000 UTC]
Owwww he is so nice! owo
It would be awesome if he maybe could be friends or something with my new character Ezra: (I need to make a ref sheet for him tho <.<) His personality is a lot like Gaius' actually except for the fact that he is very talkactive and kinda frindly....but then still pretty cruel (he look sweeter at the pic i draw of him than he atually is xD) I need to work more on his personallity but...yeah :3 xD I think it could be fun if they had some kind of relationsship together I could really see them as friends or something <.< xD (He can be a wolf too btw xD)
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Umikah In reply to Rainyee [2016-05-06 14:36:30 +0000 UTC]
Aww, that would be awesome!! LETS. DO. IT!
Me start or you?
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Rainyee In reply to Umikah [2016-05-06 14:47:33 +0000 UTC]
Yushhh we are going to
And I am ok with rating +15 xD
Eh...you can start if you want to ^^
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Rainyee In reply to Umikah [2016-05-06 17:54:03 +0000 UTC]
Exra was lying on the ground, chewing on the bone from a dog that has been a bit too close too him when he had been in a not so good mood. He liftet his head, with blood dripping from his mouth, and catched a scent he could't recognize. He stood up, shook his fur, and then started following the new scent. Cant be a dpg thats for sure he thouhgt, it almost smell...toxic. He stopped up when he saw something green lying on the ground. A few steps away he saw a dark grey wolf. He walked slowly up to the wolf and bit its tail to get its attention, then took a quick step back, to have a better look at the other wolf. He tilted his head "dude" he started with a slight smirk "thats surely dosent look good"
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