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FalconArte [2014-07-16 01:21:07 +0000 UTC]
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Ooh, this is a cool piece! I'll begin by complimenting your use of perspective, which is absolutely brilliant. The way the character is drawn is perfect for the "camera angle", and the way you made the clouds all curved and swirly really helps too.
The lighting/sun effect is good, and the sky is lighter at the bottom, as it should be.
I rather like the way you do fur. It's all fluffeh-looking! And the expression on the character is alright too, though I may have prefered the eyes open. (Although I know you were goin' for that relaxed, taking-in-the-moment kinda look.)
The only thing I might've changed is the grass. Overall, the grass is fine, but with the perspective, the strands should've been wider at the bottom, like they were closer to the "camera".
Anyhow, this is a great piece! I really enjoy it! Keep up the good work!
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UnchartedUnknownStar In reply to FalconArte [2014-07-16 04:35:44 +0000 UTC]
thank you so much for the advice! Grass is so new to me hehe i've really been practicing but thanks so much for the critique :3
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FalconArte In reply to UnchartedUnknownStar [2014-07-16 04:44:10 +0000 UTC]
You're sure welcome! I'm glad when I can be of help!
Β And thanks for the watch! ^^
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PuppyMintMocha [2014-09-30 02:57:40 +0000 UTC]
This is so amazing! Looking at it just FILLS me with the feeling of awe and happiness. SUPER epic job on this!!!
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Nunafish [2014-08-24 01:25:59 +0000 UTC]
The perspective is so good!! *0*
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Dogsnacks [2014-07-15 17:28:27 +0000 UTC]
Love the color choice <3 so prettyy!
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LadyLirriea [2014-07-15 13:20:06 +0000 UTC]
Omg that lighting is amazing
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Tazzycat432 [2014-07-15 02:24:53 +0000 UTC]
uhg skrew the summer sun.. down here it sucks.. and every things air conditions have been breaking! this is nice though. i like the light effect.
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INKFR0ST [2014-07-15 02:01:38 +0000 UTC]
aaah my gosh this is so lovely <3
You pulled off the angle really well and the colours are so nice and happy!Β
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