Description
I did a reimagening of Nal(short for Nalryn) - the main protagonist and OC of my novel.
I have added and changed a few things here, since posting the pilot and the novel is coming together nicely.
Things I changed:
1. He used to have tied back shoulder length hair. Now his hair is medium length, coarse and wavy.
2. Previously had tall, lean build. Now - unusually tall and muscular for an elf. Still slender compared to humans.
3. He previously was a dualwielder, who used a sword in his right hand and a dagger in his left. He had his dagger at his left hip, next to his sword. Now his dagger is concealed, because he uses it as a secondary weapon(for defensive purposes mostly). Most of the time he wields his arming sword on its own.
4. got rid of the red kercief.
Personality in short: he's sort of a "make the best out of the situation at hand or run like hell" type a person. He is not a hero or downright villain, but rather a person dealing with the cards he was dealt. Curious, introvert, blunt, not very well mannered, often lacks confidence in him self and his actions, is a sweet tooth and likes to learn new things about lore. Can be reckless and impulsive at times. Sometimes acts like a coward and doesn't see it as something inherently wrong. Is afraid of spiders.
There is obviously more to his personality, but I think it would be best to find these things out by reading the actual novel.
Comments: 12
SidCena555 [2016-09-21 12:57:40 +0000 UTC]
Great work
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Nourak [2016-08-22 21:50:38 +0000 UTC]
I write...really badly. I am glad I am the only one who sees it. I look forward to reading your story when I have 5 minutes to spare for myself.
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