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underworldriver — Melancholy
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Loathing a dispositionDisdaining the emptiness left in me
Exalting me with words of praise
Drowning in your heart;melancholy occasion
the months lasting in the hours of night
Spoke of dreams that dreamed of a shared fantasy
Together sincerely we were glorified
Tasting as sweet as a drop of honey
These envisions of those sights
Your voice left me placid
Untouched satisfaction
Your words gave my nervousness a bed
Branding me with darling scars
Giving me wings;my levitation
A soul is defying it's loneliness
Denying the core of truth
Not to stop believing
The remembrances of the night skies
Where we both shared in the breathing
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Comments: 15
Beautifully written. I believe the second stanza was my favorite. I know this feeling well. Wonderful job. Keep up the great work!
~*MagpieVon
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Thank you very much! i appreciate it!
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thank you very much.
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i agree with many of the previous comments. the third stanza is indeed beautifully, although sadly, written. The "darling scars"....that could be a poem in itself.
inspiring, and for whatever you were feeling at the time:
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Thank you! the darling scars came out from how someone can make you feel so good, but so bad at the same time. It makes sense. because with feeling hurt scars can be left behind.
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*nods* well said!
once again, stuning piece.
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very powerful words.
'branding me with darling scars'
great paradox.
i love it.
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I was pretty clever on my part 
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"Your voice left me placid
Untouched satisfaction
your words gave my nervousness a bed
branding me with darling scars
Giving me wings;my levitation"
This stanza is AWESOME
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