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UnholyHippo — Morning Coffee: Concept 1

Published: 2005-05-19 02:59:32 +0000 UTC; Views: 166; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 6
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Description Morning Coffee: An Ode To Those Who Never Really 'Wake Up'

This is a really rough concept sketch of a comic I'm thinking about doing later. I'd like some critique on the character models and such if at all possible. Thanks for your time.
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Sableblix [2005-05-20 02:00:30 +0000 UTC]

Hm. I like the concept a lot, and the kid. The adult seems ~too~ stiff, and the hands bother me a lot. I think it's pushing the limits of simplicity. The face is priceless though, and the kid drooling in it's crib. I couldn't help but laugh. It reminds me of my mother in the morning when we're camping.

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UnholyHippo In reply to Sableblix [2005-05-20 02:04:44 +0000 UTC]

I'll keep playing with the figure on the adult methinks. I wanna make it into a day-by-day strip instead of a storyarc work. I like the simplistic styles in the arms but it leaves very little if any room for movement. Thanks for the critique Jenny!

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