kurokimashin [2009-04-21 03:30:53 +0000 UTC]
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The White Balance, good focus, and the fact that there is no over or underexposure makes this a picture well taken. But the composition needs work, The cables in the back and the grill in the bottom makes it somewhat charged with elements that shouldn't be there. It distracts from the bird that is the main subject. This kind of pictures are taken as if it was a portrait, the subject must stand out from the rest. The background should be something simple, if not possible, use the telephoto reach of your lens and try to isolate it with a fast aperture.A tighter crop would make this picture better. Or another angle if possible.e.deviantart.com/emoticons/s/sā¦ " width="15" height="15" alt="" title=" (Smile)" />
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Unicornmon In reply to kurokimashin [2009-04-21 06:16:33 +0000 UTC]
im going to mention the camera i used is a point and shoot that works like an SLR *its also hard to move the cables when shes nesting there.*
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IigouthamiI [2009-04-21 01:02:02 +0000 UTC]
i want a dove!
Unicornmon In reply to IigouthamiI [2009-04-21 01:03:25 +0000 UTC]
lol
IigouthamiI In reply to Unicornmon [2009-04-21 01:33:09 +0000 UTC]
i mean they look soo great