Comments: 6
godhorse [2008-11-24 12:38:00 +0000 UTC]
NIOCE! writing. Even more interested to know of the origins of their relationship.
👍: 0 ⏩: 1
mooglemistress [2008-11-24 05:45:31 +0000 UTC]
Hah. I'm loving the dialogue here. Your character's seem to be growing a lot as time goes by. Always entertaining to see character's bickering with each other!
👍: 0 ⏩: 1
Galim [2008-11-24 03:59:58 +0000 UTC]
a classic plot line
👍: 0 ⏩: 1
UniverseV In reply to Galim [2009-01-03 17:44:37 +0000 UTC]
heh
👍: 0 ⏩: 0