Comments: 11
MissWilla [2016-12-31 12:12:56 +0000 UTC]
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Overall this is pretty good, but the one thing that I'd say is that it needs way, way more shading. I quite like how you're showing each individual strand of hair, and the way that you reimagined the eyes. I can barely see the nose, however, and the skin looks flat like paper. I can see that you've done a little shading, but it's barely visible. Judging by how the original character seen in the cartoon looks vs. your artwork, it appears that you're going for semi-realism. Now, the anatomy is mostly good, but I'd suggest you do some research regarding facial structure, especially in the eye area. Thank you for taking the time to read my critique :3
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MissWilla [2016-12-31 11:52:02 +0000 UTC]
Oh my gosh I've seen that video! XD There truly is fanart of everything :3
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mahogany-poulaine [2016-11-16 02:02:13 +0000 UTC]
This is really marvellous, especially the softness of the facial features. And thank you for introducing me to Takena, for this I am very grateful indeed.
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unnion In reply to mahogany-poulaine [2016-11-16 04:22:24 +0000 UTC]
thank you! this is a very nice comment
also you are welcome, i love takena!
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Radio-DayDream [2016-11-14 12:39:45 +0000 UTC]
Ah man I'm not the only one who likes his works??
ON TO THE PAINTING
Hell man it looks fucking gorgeous, from the simplicity of the skin, to how complex the hair is and how you can see multiple strands, oml it blends together beautifully!!
keep up the work man~
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