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Published: 2003-08-05 04:40:03 +0000 UTC; Views: 318; Favourites: 1; Downloads: 11
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Description \"Wrapped up in your arms
I don\'t feel so cold
Such a sudden warmth
When I have you to hold

When I\'m alone in bed
I think too deep
But when I am with you
I can actually sleep\"

You make me feel like I have purpose
Give me something to long for in my day
To look forward to
To dream about
You touch me even when you\'re not around
So warm and tender
Always there
Just for me
You hold me close
Make everything okay
You make all of my horrible thoughts go away
You take my breath away
Steal it from me
But I like to be breathless
As long as I can know you are mine
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Comments: 13

daz99cox [2003-10-07 18:25:23 +0000 UTC]

awesome, the part about actually sleeping is such a well made point, very very nice and from the heart, (fave)

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unopened In reply to daz99cox [2003-10-08 13:08:09 +0000 UTC]

Thankyou, I sent it to my boyfriend last week, because it was about him, and he just said... "Thanks". That's it! He's not very poetical. He writes funny punk songs and such. But everything i make him, give him, or write him, he puts on his wall next to his bed with my pictures. He's a sweetie inside.

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daz99cox In reply to unopened [2003-10-08 17:41:48 +0000 UTC]

nice, i'm happy for you!!! i wish everyone was happy and creative like you and while alot of us aren't it's always good to know that such things are possible. thanks for sharing all this cool stuff!!

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celest [2003-10-02 23:57:03 +0000 UTC]

Hmm. Die you and your perfect relationship. Good job.

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unopened In reply to celest [2003-10-03 11:45:34 +0000 UTC]

you want me to die!?! Fine! (Just kidding) Thanks for the 'good job'. I'm quite proud of myself as well, except I'm not getting engaged yet... erie.

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fallenzero [2003-10-02 22:33:40 +0000 UTC]

That's lovley, and well written, too. You must have something really special-- i'm envious. The second stanza was awesome, i really enjoyed it.

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unopened In reply to fallenzero [2003-10-02 22:37:39 +0000 UTC]

Thanks so very much.

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quietafterchaos [2003-08-20 04:59:51 +0000 UTC]

Very nice.
I like it.
I feel the same way with my boy.
You put it into words very well.
xD

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verre [2003-08-15 03:05:22 +0000 UTC]

That's so sweet. I really like the sencond stanza. If thats what it's called. I forget.

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itsumo [2003-08-11 22:03:46 +0000 UTC]

wow i like the poem very much *sniffles* i'm gonna cry...

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gortho-pankake-paris [2003-08-06 15:56:21 +0000 UTC]

i love it, but all you happy people must stop shoving this stuff into my face. other than that, i love it.

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nightwhispers [2003-08-06 02:47:06 +0000 UTC]

It's really sweet, and I know where your coming from. Makes me long..

Very well-written.

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adisturbedmind15 [2003-08-05 05:24:58 +0000 UTC]

Wow thats very well done. I think it catches the emotion of the situation very well. heh also reminds me of things happening in my life. -suddenly feels emo- ahhhh gotta go

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