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Published: 2004-03-16 16:02:32 +0000 UTC; Views: 176; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 26
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Description Little does she know,
She’s the brightest star in my sky,
Though she may feel like she’s burning out.

Little does she know,
She’s the sugar in the candy,
Though she may feel so bitter.

Little does she know,
She’s the sun that shines,
Though she may feel so cold inside.

Little does she know,
She’s the water that cleanses,
Though she may feel so dirty.

Little does she know,
She’s that doll that every kid wants,
Though she may feel like the toy on the back shelf.

Little does she know,
Everybody loves her,
Though she may feel so alone…

She’s not.
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Comments: 13

verre [2004-03-21 02:26:32 +0000 UTC]

I know the feeling. About other people.

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Mooness [2004-03-18 20:11:34 +0000 UTC]

Its my ex...

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mizz-messed-up [2004-03-18 03:57:27 +0000 UTC]

i love you, too. i wish i could say it to you more often.
thank you, sarah. you're the diamond in the rough that everyone talks about.

you are brilliance.

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unopened In reply to mizz-messed-up [2004-03-18 14:15:13 +0000 UTC]

thanks Leba.

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nightwhispers [2004-03-17 22:19:19 +0000 UTC]

I LOVE this. It reminds me of how I feel about my best friend. This is very strong, very well written and lovely.

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unopened In reply to nightwhispers [2004-03-18 14:15:47 +0000 UTC]

thankyou. she's a great person.

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pootoo [2004-03-16 18:53:12 +0000 UTC]

aw.. this is so beautiful!! very touching

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quietafterchaos [2004-03-16 16:44:19 +0000 UTC]

very sweet.

I like it a lot.
It's always nice to get poems like that.
I'm sure it'll brighten up her day.

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unopened In reply to quietafterchaos [2004-03-18 14:16:07 +0000 UTC]

that's what I was hoping for.

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veronicavoltage [2004-03-16 16:05:51 +0000 UTC]

A very sweet poem, I love the opening stanza.

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unopened In reply to veronicavoltage [2004-03-18 14:16:23 +0000 UTC]

Thankyou.

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Mooness [2004-03-16 16:04:27 +0000 UTC]

~Claps~ Thats good kind of how i feel about a girl i know..

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unopened In reply to Mooness [2004-03-18 14:16:49 +0000 UTC]

i'm sure a lot of people feel like this about their close friends.

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