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Published: 2003-02-05 03:30:30 +0000 UTC; Views: 204; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 8
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Little by little,The rain covers my body.
Overwhelming warmth.
Spinning round and round,
Like a pinwheel in my hand.
The top of life spins.
Why do I see this?
Hear these voices? See these things?
It is the dark gift.
Don\'t ever leave me.
Don\'t you ever give up hope.
I\'ll hold on for you.
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dayum! you're one fine beatnik, Sarah! i'm very impressed!
super lovely poems. i like all the symbolism and..
yeah. what he said.
love it.
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i'm impressed.
you didn't miss a beat with the sylables. i especially like the first, chunked full of tastey imagery and yummy symbolism. all the essential ingrediants of a good haiku. you should continue to submit your poems, you'll be a haiku master in no time.
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