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Published: 2017-11-24 17:34:26 +0000 UTC; Views: 914; Favourites: 63; Downloads: 7
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I've known about it pretty early, but never knew that it was a horror game until I kept seeing spoilers.And then my siblings play the game, and they kill Sayori. Just wonderful.
not to mention the eyes just look so off... like they're the only non-complex thing in the picture.
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ah, thank you!
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you're welcome =w=
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Adorable, I really like the chibi feel to the piece. How do you get your lines so clean and smooth? I always have difficulties with keeping my lines not wibbly wobbly T^^^T
It is a bit minimalist, but for this piece the simplicity gives it a lot of character and really emphasizes the cute aspects. I would say to add a bit more shading or shines to her, maybe a bit more depth around the areas where her hair hangs over her face and more depth inside and around her shirt collar; the main 'shine' on her hair came out great, you should definitely do a larger scale work with those shine and gradient skills. I really like the eyes, my favourite thing about her is her expression, but be careful about making the eyes 'symmetrical' per say. I think her right eye is just a tad too close to her left. With the chibi feel to it the eyes are great, but it might pose an issue with something more complex. On a related note, her neck is so tiny, again it's not an issue here but would definitely look strange with a more complex piece. I keep talking about more 'complexity' when I probably can't mimic this xD but try doing a crazy drawing: a dynamic character and pose with a cool background or something, I think you'd do great! 'vvv'
Lastly, take this critique with some salt, I'm certainly not bigger or better than you (probably the opposite haha), and keep up the amazing work! >vvv<
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oh, thank you for such comprehensive criticism!
i'll try my best and try to challenge myself ;v;
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--Sorry for the bad english--
This draw in MY opinion is a little minimalist but it's so great and your talented!! The thick line art gives a lot of personality and the expresion of the character is easy to locate. That face expresses pure happyness
CONGRATULATIONS Your draw haves a lot of personality and is adorable,and the color palette is so beautiful
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Oh, thank you!
And I don't think your English is bad, it's pretty good.
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This is a super cute drawing.
I just adore the look, the smile.
And if it wasn't cute enough you've added a wonderfull red ribbon in the hair and hearts in the eyes.
It is a drawing that makes happy. Great work.
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Thanks for the wonderful compliment.
;w;
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Aw, I love her big smile! She looks so exuberant! The colors are lovely as well! I like the shiny looking shading and general style of the piece!
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Thank you so much for the compliment ;w;
I don't get much feedback on my art, so it's nice to have comments like these. ;0;
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You're welcome 
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