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Unsung-Hero — -25 Corpses for Company-
Published: 2006-01-11 11:32:41 +0000 UTC; Views: 346; Favourites: 2; Downloads: 8
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Description Its so surreal, Lying in the rain.
The ground tormented and so stricken with pain.
How is this so, how did it come to be,
25 corpses for company.

Did I lash out? Set my madness free?
I guess I’ll never know,
As those who would’ve seen,
Heartless and decapitated, they lie around me.

I haven’t been myself lately, Driven insane.
Tearing at the wallpaper, tearing it again.
It’s all the madness and pain trapped within,
Once started, the end will never begin.

You wonder how I’ve become this way,
Pain and torment, day by day.
In the end, bound to rush from me,
25 corpses for company.




I havnt really finished this.... but then got lazy. like with most of the stuff I put on here
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Comments: 10

iamconnectingflight [2006-05-13 10:31:13 +0000 UTC]

The first verse/stanza reminded me of the opening chapter of 'Shadow' by K J Parker, where the main character first witnesses a dream where he's talking to himself reflected in a puddle, and then awakens with no memory of who he is, lying in churned up mud surrounded by corpses.

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then-the-tears-fell [2006-05-02 20:33:04 +0000 UTC]

^_^ Oh my goodness! I completely and utterly LOVE this! ^_^

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Unsung-Hero In reply to then-the-tears-fell [2006-05-03 05:33:05 +0000 UTC]

Thanks alot! and thanks for the fav too!

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AllegraMerticus [2006-02-01 00:54:28 +0000 UTC]

I do like this one lachlan. The first line of the second 'verse' really opens up the story. I would like to work on this with music Kitties.

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X13plue13X [2006-01-14 07:00:42 +0000 UTC]

YUTDOUVGUYTDOUTR*^%#W&%$DKHGT(&#^E*(&O*&IDUIJYTD^%E@!!!!!!!
*has a spaz attack*
This is... amazing!!!! *tries to control another spaz*... maybe I should just go through and just fave all of your stuff...

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X13plue13X In reply to X13plue13X [2006-01-15 02:37:51 +0000 UTC]

Haha... I probably will... or I would if my comp didn't take forever to load when I fave things.. Sometime, I'll just take a day to go through your gallery and fave it!!

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Unsung-Hero In reply to X13plue13X [2006-01-15 11:58:15 +0000 UTC]

lol, i was joking. You really dont have 2! But thanx for the comment! I love all your work 2! its so good, so deep. I love it

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Unsung-Hero In reply to X13plue13X [2006-01-14 10:08:00 +0000 UTC]

LOL! I really don't think its all that great, but thanx ...... you can fave it all if u want!

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renaissancefreak [2006-01-11 22:44:08 +0000 UTC]

25 corpses for company

made me shudder. very haunting.

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xxxforgottenrosexxx [2006-01-11 12:54:17 +0000 UTC]

this actually seriously kicks ass...

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