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v13raptor — Poem 023
Published: 2014-02-27 00:37:51 +0000 UTC; Views: 249; Favourites: 1; Downloads: 0
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Description Where broken hearts meet oceans blue ...
.. Open your eyes, this sunset's for you.
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Qwertynim [2014-02-27 01:24:24 +0000 UTC]

I've had a prejudice against short poems, but that was amazing. You conveyed a meaningful message in two lines. It takes me twenty lines to do that. U r truly amazing. Can u look at some of my poems and give me critique so I might become awesome like you?

Sniff* it was beautiful

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