Comments: 18
TyrantisTerror [2010-09-18 00:32:01 +0000 UTC]
Excellent work! Nice to have another mammalian monster in the mix - and a big cat to boot (I'm a feline fan)! The story has the level of depth and intrigue I've come to expect from your entries.
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OperaGhost21 [2010-09-17 21:34:01 +0000 UTC]
very cool! Love that you worked Manticore into his backstory, too!
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Ravensaurs-Rex [2010-09-16 01:17:03 +0000 UTC]
Heh, you seem to have given him "wing nubs".
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JacobSpencerKaiju79 [2010-09-15 23:34:29 +0000 UTC]
That was pretty cool. Hmmmm.. still trying to fit Monsturra in these events.
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RenDragonClaw [2010-09-15 23:18:21 +0000 UTC]
I was wondering when Garm was going to get some more action. Dedun ironically provides it. The namesake is something that probably would have been over kill in Dark Hours but in KAS, it makes him fit right in. Some actual developement for Manticore Inc. too, that was some good human level stuff there.
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RenDragonClaw In reply to Vagrant-Verse [2010-09-16 06:23:12 +0000 UTC]
I was just thinking about that lol. Once Marez's blood starts flying around it becomes a literal blood bath in more ways than one. Shimaku wouldn't be nearly as fun since she doesn't breath. Might still work but not to nearly the same extent.
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ProfessorCene [2010-09-15 22:47:17 +0000 UTC]
Nice. Controlling such large animals would be a tough job. And the ending is very suspenseful.
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Scatha-the-Worm [2010-09-15 22:39:54 +0000 UTC]
Love the design of this guy-the black spikes apposed to the off white of the original look nice. The powers are really interesting-that would be a handy thing to have, especially the sleeping defense. I'd like to see someone try to wake me up then, lol.
The story is pretty awesome, too. Love how you fleshed out Manticore a little more-the idea that not everyone agrees with the decisions they made and got a little angry isn't something I would have ever thought to use.
Is it odd that I'm angry at my own fictional company for trying to destroy Dedun?
Lol, and I love that they all freaked out the first time Dedun and Garm met, and Garm was probably trying to play. XD
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AkityMH [2010-09-15 22:17:09 +0000 UTC]
I like him
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AkityMH [2010-09-15 22:17:09 +0000 UTC]
I like him
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