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Published: 2005-01-06 17:44:08 +0000 UTC; Views: 99; Favourites: 2; Downloads: 8
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Description You ask me what my world is like.

  I tell you that you will never understand my world.
  You ask me again what it is like each day,


  I say to you again, you will never know unless you look through my eyes.
To see my soul and what my life is like for me each passing day


  You look into my eyes, deep into my soul, you see a happy memory, you feel my happiness
I tell you.......you don't know the true feeling of my joy in that one moment
You see a painful past your heart is in pain.....


I laugh and say you do not know the true feeling of the pain, nor the bleeding
of my heart that cries out in pain,


You tell me.......that you understand my feelings...you understand what I went through.....all the     pain...and all the joy
  I tell you............no you do not understand, nor do you know my thoughts or my hearts need for  love......and my need for peace.............and no more pain



I tell you, you will never know that true feeling I felt in that happy moment..........nor the true pain I felt both past present and future.


No matter how hard you try to see and feel how I feel.....or think
you still will not know.................


My world...
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Comments: 25

fumf [2005-01-09 06:16:33 +0000 UTC]

Nice!!

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vamp4life In reply to fumf [2005-01-09 17:47:38 +0000 UTC]

thanxs

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nightblink [2005-01-07 20:40:15 +0000 UTC]

The way you write is very interesting. It gets the emotion through to the reader quite well. And you improved your spelling!

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reallytalldude In reply to nightblink [2005-05-15 19:31:56 +0000 UTC]

wait a second - the MARS LIGHTHOUSE? Its a golden sun fan!

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nightblink In reply to reallytalldude [2005-05-16 09:52:19 +0000 UTC]

Indeed! And judging by your reaction, I believe you are one as well! Nice 'ta meetcha.

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reallytalldude In reply to nightblink [2005-05-17 02:44:05 +0000 UTC]

yes i beat the first one - nearly beat the second one - i got to the things last head. Now i can't find the game . Yes but Golden Sun is da shiznit P: . Ya so - is the mars lighthouse thing by any chance an inside joke o.O

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nightblink In reply to reallytalldude [2005-05-18 19:53:03 +0000 UTC]

Actually, yes. My best friend and I come up with a lot of fanfiction, and she absolutely ADORES Piers/Picard(whatever you want to call him), and we decided that he blushes like hell whenever she/her character makes any *cough* 'moves' towards him...you get the picture. Bright red. Mars Lighthouse. SHINING LIKE THE MAAAAAAAAAAAARRRS LIGHTHOUSE!!! ...ahem. If you want more on the story, try asking . She'll talk your ear off.

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reallytalldude In reply to nightblink [2005-05-18 20:04:46 +0000 UTC]

lol okay i'll ask her about it - but will she really talk my ear of is she that freindly to strangers?

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nightblink In reply to reallytalldude [2005-05-18 20:58:18 +0000 UTC]

Yeah, sometimes. Tell her nightblink recommends you for some Golden Sun rants.

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reallytalldude In reply to nightblink [2005-05-18 21:31:59 +0000 UTC]

i sent her a note . I told her that you told me to ask her that.

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vamp4life In reply to nightblink [2005-01-07 21:54:29 +0000 UTC]

well * zeeblee help* hehe

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simplysweetmelodies [2005-01-07 17:06:51 +0000 UTC]

very nice

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vamp4life In reply to simplysweetmelodies [2005-01-07 17:22:29 +0000 UTC]

thanxs

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Zeeblee [2005-01-07 04:12:20 +0000 UTC]

Nice. I like the way you split it up. Great context as well. It very effectively conveys emotion.

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vamp4life In reply to Zeeblee [2005-01-07 16:54:27 +0000 UTC]

thanxs

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Zeeblee In reply to vamp4life [2005-01-07 22:44:46 +0000 UTC]

Ye be welcome. I got to be an editor!

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vamp4life In reply to Zeeblee [2005-01-08 01:47:23 +0000 UTC]

yup!!!

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ephermerentdiety [2005-01-07 02:29:36 +0000 UTC]

o.O
can..not...empathize...or...poem...will. ..smite...me!

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vamp4life In reply to ephermerentdiety [2005-01-07 17:23:25 +0000 UTC]

hehe its okay *hugs*

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KeraziKracker [2005-01-06 21:36:30 +0000 UTC]

amazing feelings, the you kept me gripped was just brilliant.
I know i've probably said it before, but I do know how you feel, kinda, and you'll get past this *hugsyouveryveryveryverytightlywithanext raspecailschqueeze*

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vamp4life In reply to KeraziKracker [2005-01-07 17:38:12 +0000 UTC]

* queezzing me to hard must breathe*

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KeraziKracker In reply to vamp4life [2005-01-07 18:26:17 +0000 UTC]

Aaaaack! *lets go* Hehe sorrwwwi

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vamp4life In reply to KeraziKracker [2005-01-07 21:55:46 +0000 UTC]

* hugs*

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greendragon56 [2005-01-06 17:48:16 +0000 UTC]

good work on the poem

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vamp4life In reply to greendragon56 [2005-01-06 18:34:13 +0000 UTC]

thanxs

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