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tangerinewarning [2008-05-20 16:45:02 +0000 UTC]
Nice work.
Love the sharp and starkness of Jamie's knife and the detail of his boots.
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vandonovan In reply to spiritedchaos [2007-11-13 00:03:43 +0000 UTC]
I don't mind critique, although I've already submitted it to the publication, so it's going to be printed as-is. I know it's got some issues but I was content enough with it when I finished. I'm not sure what you mean by the "fuzziness of the noise" ... Jamie's left leg has a bit of light on it, is that the glitch you're reffering to?
As for the lineart, yeah, I did it all on PSP and I didn't spend much time smoothing out the lineart or anything. Some of the highlights are especially ... pixely. Ah well. I'm sure it'll print smoothly. XDXDXD Like I said, it could use a LOT of work (Pati-Yana's hand bothers the FUCK out of me, as does the lantern itself), but it's "good enough" I guess, ahahahha.
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vandonovan In reply to spiritedchaos [2007-11-13 06:57:35 +0000 UTC]
Yes, that line was left there intentionally. I suppose it does look a bit silly, but I liked the way it defined his calf, hahahahaha. Oh well. It doesn't make a lot of sense to be sure.
It's nice to know that I could improve it, but that I'm okay with it where it is too. I like to see room for improvement, but I also like to know that I don't have to ALWAYS fuck with pictures until they're perfect, so to speak. (Nevermind that Two/Jamie console one that is never going to get finished hahaaha sob.)
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vandonovan In reply to Marker-Mistress [2007-10-31 00:02:45 +0000 UTC]
You do so much art! How can you not find time! XD
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vandonovan In reply to Hussian [2007-10-28 19:18:16 +0000 UTC]
Heeee, thank you! I'm a bit sad I didn't spend more time on it, 'cause there are things I'd like to tweak, but enough is enough. I think any details will be swallowed dead on the print anyway.
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AishaLeHerisson [2007-10-28 11:34:06 +0000 UTC]
I love the picture but I'm torn between rooting for Jamie (who is a brilliant DW companion) and the dragon (I love dragons...)
:-/
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vandonovan In reply to AishaLeHerisson [2007-10-28 17:34:24 +0000 UTC]
To be fair, the dragon eats the girl in the next few minutes, and has been stealing and eating village children for generations, and is sick and disgusting and fat. (And might even be human; the story doesn't make it clear.) So. It's not a nice dragon.
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