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VaneeshConqueesh β€” Tales of Republic City - Chapter 1

Published: 2012-08-01 01:03:27 +0000 UTC; Views: 968; Favourites: 17; Downloads: 14
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Description Set seven months after the Equalist Revolution has ended, Korra has since regained her bending abilities, and can go into the Avatar State.

Noatak and Tarrlok have since returned to Republic City and have become two of Korra's closest friends. Now, they and the rest of Korra's friends have to help prepare her for one of the most important moments of her life: her anniversary with Mako.

The story starts off pretty serious, but it gets fluffier, trust me. Major Amorra/Noarra, Korrlok, and Korrasami friendships, and the main pairing is Makorra with light Irosami. Similar to Tales of Ba Sing Se from Avatar: The Last Airbender.

First fanfic, so go easy on me. xD

Rated T for mild language
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Comments: 5

jay-bird69 [2012-08-26 04:08:55 +0000 UTC]

hmmm... Pretty good and interesting idea, though so far, it doesn't seem that similar to Tales of Ba Sing Se, mainly because that was a collection of short, unconnected stories featuring individual characters (excepting Katara and Toph) rather than a single plotline featuring multiple characters

I do think it is quite well written (and awesome job with the spelling and grammar!) The only thing I have to pick at writing wise is the sentence "Korra’s bright blue eyes twinkled with surprise and worry." I'm not sure I would write "twinkled" (that seems to imply happiness, mischief or amusement). Maybe try "Korra's bright blue eyes widened in surprise and worry." But really, well done. Not sure I agree that Amon/Noatok and Tarrlok survived the explosion (I don't think waterbenders/ex-waterbenders take those quite so well as firebenders), but this is very well written so far. Keep up the good work!

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gtjio [2012-08-01 01:20:37 +0000 UTC]

Then, Korra and Asami both gasped as their ovaries simultaneous exploded

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VaneeshConqueesh In reply to gtjio [2012-08-01 01:26:21 +0000 UTC]

I am seriously considering adding that to the next chapter. xD

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shinjanator [2012-08-01 01:14:50 +0000 UTC]

GIRL QUIT BEING SO HARSH! THIS WAS FINE!

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VaneeshConqueesh In reply to shinjanator [2012-08-01 01:25:53 +0000 UTC]

QUIT LYING TO ME WOMAN. xDDD

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