kev-nuu [2002-09-01 08:41:16 +0000 UTC]
Your poem reminded me of this song!
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Warm October nights
You came and cuddled next to me, baby, oh yea yea yea
Our noses brushed so close
I wished it was our souls
Drifting off to sleep
I could hear the little snores you made
Watching eyes shut tight
Like doors to something sweet, oh where you rest
Tear me off a piece of blanket
Keep me warm and we can make it
Here's my heart, i'll let you break it
Touched your skin and I can't take it
Light will creep in soon
And I still haven't slept a wink, baby, oh yea yea yea
I wish the sun would hide his head
So i could watch you dream some more
Wish the sun would hide his head
So i could watch you dream some more
I wanna watch you dream some more
I wanna watch you dream some more girl
I wanna watch you dream some more
I wanna watch you
drifting off to sleep....
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They are both equally beautiful!
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neywon [2002-09-01 08:16:14 +0000 UTC]
Short, sweet, heartwarming, A great read, keep it up.
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