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vangelius — Perfect Love
Published: 2002-09-01 08:00:11 +0000 UTC; Views: 211; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 10
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Description all alone,
darkness closing in,
slowly feeling the shadow grow in me.

soft light,
lovely child,
her bright smile piercing my darkness.

in the night,
the darkened night,
my lovely girl next to me, warming me.
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Comments: 3

oriana [2005-03-03 22:54:58 +0000 UTC]

I'm being nosey but who's this about vangelius?
@->-

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kev-nuu [2002-09-01 08:41:16 +0000 UTC]

Your poem reminded me of this song!

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Warm October nights
You came and cuddled next to me, baby, oh yea yea yea
Our noses brushed so close
I wished it was our souls
Drifting off to sleep
I could hear the little snores you made
Watching eyes shut tight
Like doors to something sweet, oh where you rest

Tear me off a piece of blanket
Keep me warm and we can make it
Here's my heart, i'll let you break it
Touched your skin and I can't take it

Light will creep in soon
And I still haven't slept a wink, baby, oh yea yea yea
I wish the sun would hide his head
So i could watch you dream some more
Wish the sun would hide his head
So i could watch you dream some more

I wanna watch you dream some more
I wanna watch you dream some more girl
I wanna watch you dream some more
I wanna watch you

drifting off to sleep....

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They are both equally beautiful!

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neywon [2002-09-01 08:16:14 +0000 UTC]

Short, sweet, heartwarming, A great read, keep it up.

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