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Vanidar — Dawn
Published: 2005-11-23 08:15:42 +0000 UTC; Views: 88; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 6
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Description How often do two watch a sunrise?
How rare, are early moments shared?

Does one raise the sun for another?
Does the spreading light ever hold?

Do you ever listen to the songbirds in the brisk morning?
Do they ever stop singing their songs?
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Comments: 15

Rayli [2006-03-17 14:57:48 +0000 UTC]

I love mornings - especially an amazing sunrise. I hope I never lose my awe for them Great poem!

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fripturici [2006-01-25 18:09:24 +0000 UTC]

those moments are rare unfortunately and they go unoticed.

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Vanidar In reply to fripturici [2006-01-25 20:01:51 +0000 UTC]

Yep.

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dearambellina2113 [2006-01-07 05:26:50 +0000 UTC]

Hehe, the last bit puts me in mind of the whole "If a tree falls in the forest with no one nearby to hear it, does it make a sound?" thing... Very nice. Short but sweet, as they say.

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Vanidar In reply to dearambellina2113 [2006-01-07 08:15:39 +0000 UTC]

If a tree falls in the forest and you hear it, are you the lumberjack?

*smiles* Thanks. I put a lot into this poem.

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dearambellina2113 In reply to Vanidar [2006-01-08 22:42:54 +0000 UTC]

Yes, yes I am the lumberjack... It's like "I am the Walrus." Only, "I am the Lumberjack." Yeah, okay... shutting up now...

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Vanidar In reply to dearambellina2113 [2006-01-09 07:24:41 +0000 UTC]

*chuckles and nods* The good thing about dawn... is they come... on a regular basis.

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dearambellina2113 In reply to Vanidar [2006-01-10 04:27:59 +0000 UTC]

That's true, but that can also be a negative quality, because you take them for granted and never stop to watch...

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Vanidar In reply to dearambellina2113 [2006-01-10 07:14:28 +0000 UTC]

Sometimes you need each one.

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Fearecia [2005-11-23 19:59:07 +0000 UTC]

You know, the one nice thing about living so far north is that in the spring and fall you are often up in time to see the sunrises.

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Vanidar In reply to Fearecia [2005-11-24 00:40:57 +0000 UTC]

*smiles* Yeah... I meant to be up for this one, but alas it wasn't to be. *stretches and wakes up*

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Fearecia In reply to Vanidar [2005-11-24 07:44:30 +0000 UTC]

Lazy bum.

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Vanidar In reply to Fearecia [2005-11-24 09:31:02 +0000 UTC]

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mad-mosher [2005-11-23 08:21:28 +0000 UTC]

Sadly,not often enough
Beautiful piece though,makes you think

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Vanidar In reply to mad-mosher [2005-11-24 00:44:20 +0000 UTC]

Thank you. That was it's intention.

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