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Vanilla-Brownie — Tempest Janna
Published: 2012-09-18 22:25:49 +0000 UTC; Views: 1873; Favourites: 28; Downloads: 63
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Fanart of Janna with the Tempest Skin. Janna is from the videogame League of Legends.Related content
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It's such a great image that you clearly put a lot of work into, but if I may note, the lips are a little much. With the style that you drew her in, I think simpler, smaller and less vibrant lips would look better. When I cover them up with my finger it already looks more appealing. Perhaps even changing the color would help, something more common in the image like blue.
I apologize if I seem rude I don't mean to, I just think it would look better with one of those suggestions because it really is a great drawing overall with a lot of fun detail and great movement to it.
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As odd as it sounds you are not the first one who tells me so. I edited it...and yeah, it is better that way. This version now is the re-edited, so I hope you like it more (same as me).
Thanks for the critique, it was taken into consideration :3
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