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Description So I watched the 9 endings for Starfox Command on Youtube, and in one of them, the members of SF decide to disband the team and Fox And Krystal end up together and have a son named Marcus, who later recreates the Starfox team.
But I couldn't help but think it's starting to get a little cheesy with this son-following-in-father's-footsteps thing (though I'm not surprised - after all it's Starfox Command ).
I don't usually mind such things, I mean It was nice with Fox McCloud taking over James' position as the Starfox leader, but with Marcus repeating that thing, it gets a bit perpetual.
So I started having these ideas of how a daughter of theirs would be like.
And short after, I got this huge inspiration to try and carry out that idea!
Aaaand, the result became this: Kelly McCloud!

All in all, this took me about a month to finish....0.o xD


Personality:
She is very brave, but reckless. Being a born leader, she is good at keeping people's mood up. Because of her recklessness and quite fiery temper, she's rather prone to get in trouble.
But she's also very loyal and passionate and would do anything to protect the people she loves.

Appearance:
With Kelly's character design, my two main goals were to make her resemble her parents and to make her appearance fit her personality (naturally).
Originally, I drew her with a small, bushy fringe on her
forehead (the kind you see in Disney movies ) to emphazise her spunkiness. :3 But to give her some more resemblance to Krystal, I wanted her to have the same straight, spiky-esque hair.
So I tried drawing her with several hairstyles, but the only look that fit her was to just add bangs, like most female Starfox characters have.
And, just in case you can't tell, she's rather short in height, with a distinct hourglass figure, pretty much like her mother, but with slightly smaller boobs.

Voice:
Well, basically: picture Krystal's voice, only a bit higher, more badass-sounding and with an american accent. Not the super girly voice this kind of characters in anime tend to have. ^.^


Family and relationships:

Fox:
Due to her reckless behavior, Fox is a quite strict and controlling parent, but also very patient.
And although his strict demeanor towards Kelly is something she finds annoying, she never purposely does anything to upset him or hurt his feelings. After all, she is very close to him and there is no person she treasures more. And, by leading the new SF team, she's determined to make him proud!

Falco:
Being the oldest and most experienced member of Kelly's Starfox-team by far, Falco is an invaluable mentor to the other members, especially the inexperienced Kelly. Even when she starts to mature and further develop the skills necessary in her job, she, and the other teammates, considers him one of the most important teammates.


Skills:
Being a student at the Cornerian Flight Academy, Kelly has fairly decent skills piloting the Arwing and driving the Landmaster. She's also good at using a Blaster. Also, she shows signs of having inherited Krystal's telepathic abilities.

Weaknesses:
Although having gone through basic training in air combat at the Academy, Kelly has no experience of actual battling.


Made on A4 paper, colored with Photoshop CS2.


Disclaimer: The StarFox franchise belongs to Nintendo. Kelly McCloud belongs to me. Plz credit me if using this.
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Comments: 44

MetronZ30 [2016-09-27 16:03:51 +0000 UTC]

Hey is it alright if I can ask you something?

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vasanoja In reply to MetronZ30 [2016-09-29 17:33:36 +0000 UTC]

Go ahead.

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MetronZ30 In reply to vasanoja [2016-09-29 18:14:58 +0000 UTC]

Can you and I do a roleplay..if you dont want to thats fine I understand.

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vasanoja In reply to MetronZ30 [2016-10-01 14:31:43 +0000 UTC]

I'm kinda busy at the moment, sorry. Did you think of a fanfic roleplay with Kelly involved?

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MetronZ30 In reply to vasanoja [2016-10-01 14:33:02 +0000 UTC]

No I'm more of a free for all roleplay..I make up the story as I go... sorry....if you want me to I can try er something.

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vasanoja In reply to MetronZ30 [2016-10-03 20:43:05 +0000 UTC]

I don't really roleplay anymore, since you're asking.

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MetronZ30 In reply to vasanoja [2016-10-03 20:44:53 +0000 UTC]

Ah I see well that's fine I understand

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vasanoja In reply to MetronZ30 [2016-10-04 04:52:13 +0000 UTC]

Thanks!

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MetronZ30 In reply to vasanoja [2016-10-04 08:23:47 +0000 UTC]

No problem

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Imag35 [2012-12-06 06:01:48 +0000 UTC]

How would you like to include her in a series some friends and I are writing? In return for saying yes we'll let you write as well if you'd like. Reply and I'll give you details. (No its a not a sexual fiction, god forbid using her for one)

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Gynandromorph [2010-01-25 11:13:23 +0000 UTC]

Marcus is her brother though, right?

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vasanoja In reply to Gynandromorph [2010-01-26 21:29:30 +0000 UTC]

No, it's just her and her dad, Fox.

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DarthGoldstar710 In reply to vasanoja [2010-08-24 02:27:02 +0000 UTC]

Well, speaking of that, whatever happened to Krystal?

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vasanoja In reply to DarthGoldstar710 [2010-08-25 03:52:23 +0000 UTC]

Well, she's dead.

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DarthGoldstar710 In reply to vasanoja [2010-08-25 12:36:49 +0000 UTC]

How?

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vasanoja In reply to DarthGoldstar710 [2010-09-03 19:58:15 +0000 UTC]

Well, I thought she could've died from some illness, but now that I think of it, it sounds a bit clichΓ©d. Besides, who would die from an unknown illness in a universe with advanced science? I'm thinking of changing that.

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DarthGoldstar710 In reply to vasanoja [2010-09-04 02:27:50 +0000 UTC]

Hmm, yeah that is clichΓ©d. I don't like it too much, too "creepy".

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vasanoja In reply to DarthGoldstar710 [2010-09-10 18:35:10 +0000 UTC]

But how is it creepy?

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DarthGoldstar710 In reply to vasanoja [2010-09-11 08:26:15 +0000 UTC]

Krystal dying from an unknown disease? That's what.
No offence, but I don't like that part of your Star Fox OC's description.

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vasanoja In reply to DarthGoldstar710 [2010-09-13 10:59:22 +0000 UTC]

There's something I could say about it, though: I didn't come up with the death of Krystal-thing to provide angst, it was more because I didn't consider Krystal to be useful in this setting, and if you remember reading about Kelly inheriting those telepathic abilities, the latter would have to learn how to use them on her own, instead of learning it all from her mother. That could've provided some conflict and character development. Thoughts? (but plz be constructive!)

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DarthGoldstar710 In reply to vasanoja [2010-09-19 03:25:45 +0000 UTC]

?

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vasanoja In reply to DarthGoldstar710 [2010-10-10 01:37:03 +0000 UTC]

Never mind... Do you write fics or comics?

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DarthGoldstar710 In reply to vasanoja [2010-10-10 02:46:12 +0000 UTC]

Pretty much both. Haven't posted any on the computer yet though.

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vasanoja In reply to DarthGoldstar710 [2010-09-11 13:05:34 +0000 UTC]

Hey, no problem! I know I made a mistake when I uploaded it BEFORE taking the Mary Sue litmus tests (if that's what you're refering to). I just thought that if you'd tell me what exactly makes this part so unappealing, it could help me improve. Is it the fact that she dies from a disease in a universe with advanced technology, or just the clichΓ©d aspect of it?

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DarthGoldstar710 In reply to vasanoja [2010-09-19 03:28:13 +0000 UTC]

I have no idea what you mean by Mary Sue litmus tests and I just find it stupid how she dies from an unknown disease. No offence.

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vasanoja In reply to DarthGoldstar710 [2010-10-10 01:38:24 +0000 UTC]

Well, I hadn't exactly decided to have an "unknown" disease, just a disease. It's almost a year since I uploaded this, I don't remember everything. (It's spelled "offense", btw)

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DarthGoldstar710 In reply to vasanoja [2010-10-10 02:50:48 +0000 UTC]

Oh.

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vasanoja In reply to DarthGoldstar710 [2010-09-10 18:23:52 +0000 UTC]

Yeah, I have work to do.

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DarthGoldstar710 In reply to vasanoja [2010-09-11 08:26:35 +0000 UTC]

What do you mean by that?

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vasanoja In reply to DarthGoldstar710 [2010-09-11 13:08:15 +0000 UTC]

When I said I have work to do, I meant that I'm gonna try improve it when I feel like starting on this again. I've had other things on my mind lately. But I guess that's OK, because then I won't rush it! ^^

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DarthGoldstar710 In reply to vasanoja [2010-10-01 11:55:48 +0000 UTC]

Oh, okay.

Anyway, how much do you know about a movie called "Alpha and Omega"?

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vasanoja In reply to DarthGoldstar710 [2010-10-10 01:40:06 +0000 UTC]

Not if the animated one from 2010 (just wiki'd it). Why?

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DarthGoldstar710 In reply to vasanoja [2010-10-10 02:45:17 +0000 UTC]

If you mean by the one with the two wolves on the cover (A gold one and a gray one) then yes.

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vasanoja In reply to DarthGoldstar710 [2010-10-25 13:07:58 +0000 UTC]

Haven't seen it. I hardly watch movies anymore.

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DarthGoldstar710 In reply to vasanoja [2010-10-26 04:14:35 +0000 UTC]

Oh, that's a shame.
But I understand.

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vasanoja In reply to DarthGoldstar710 [2010-10-29 05:23:28 +0000 UTC]

I hope I'm not being too pushy now, but can you mention anything you like about my drawing, too?

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DarthGoldstar710 In reply to vasanoja [2010-10-29 13:14:39 +0000 UTC]

Well, the design on Kelly and the arwings in the backround are kinda interestin'

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vasanoja In reply to DarthGoldstar710 [2010-10-31 05:13:17 +0000 UTC]

Thanks, but what do you mean by design? Her clothes, or appearance?

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DarthGoldstar710 In reply to vasanoja [2010-10-31 16:56:54 +0000 UTC]

Appearance.

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vasanoja In reply to DarthGoldstar710 [2010-11-02 13:39:55 +0000 UTC]

Oh thanks! Now I have some feedback on the good and bad parts.

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DarthGoldstar710 In reply to vasanoja [2010-11-03 11:36:56 +0000 UTC]

NP!

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Gynandromorph In reply to vasanoja [2010-01-26 23:06:27 +0000 UTC]

Awww...

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Osmostrix [2010-01-23 05:02:24 +0000 UTC]

I agree with your opinion on the whole redundancy of having a son to follow Fox. Not a bad drawing!

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vasanoja In reply to Osmostrix [2010-01-23 05:57:00 +0000 UTC]

Thanks! Yeah, it was cool in DragonBall and Goof Troop/A Goofy Movie and such, but this ending in SFC just didn't cut it.

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