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Vdeere — Embers
Published: 2011-05-22 08:43:38 +0000 UTC; Views: 63; Favourites: 2; Downloads: 0
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Description All I really want
Is the cinnamon and gold
to dance across my tongue
Igniting all my senses
And the curve of you
Sparking like the embers
Before me
As you are now
Forever
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Comments: 8

allison767 [2011-05-27 04:29:44 +0000 UTC]

you're a really good poet

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Vdeere In reply to allison767 [2011-05-27 04:30:27 +0000 UTC]

ahw, thank you very much (:

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allison767 In reply to Vdeere [2011-05-27 04:32:47 +0000 UTC]

no prob, i really do enjoy poetry,your style is really interesting i really like it

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Vdeere In reply to allison767 [2011-05-27 04:34:28 +0000 UTC]

I'm happy to hear that thanks for taking the time to read~

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allison767 In reply to Vdeere [2011-05-27 05:10:25 +0000 UTC]

no prob they're really good

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Vdeere In reply to allison767 [2011-05-27 05:44:33 +0000 UTC]

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Nawsachi [2011-05-22 08:48:17 +0000 UTC]

Beautiful imagery, and the concept is wonderful. I love the line "Igniting all my senses"

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Vdeere In reply to Nawsachi [2011-05-22 08:50:36 +0000 UTC]

Why thank you (:
and thanks for the watch

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