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Sammeezilla [2017-09-28 06:30:52 +0000 UTC]
I really adore her long hair, but her short hair is so cute and fitting for her too!
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Elvisfonz22 [2017-09-23 02:24:41 +0000 UTC]
Incredible reference sheet I like this Saiyan lady and her Super Saiyan Form is badass. Also artstyle too Magnificent job. ☺👏.
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Vegeebs In reply to Elvisfonz22 [2017-09-23 12:32:50 +0000 UTC]
thank you so much! Im so glad you like her ;D; <3
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BH-Ouji [2017-09-19 16:03:58 +0000 UTC]
Another kid of Bardock other than Mizuna and Kakarotta?
Wow
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Vegeebs In reply to BH-Ouji [2017-09-20 04:57:04 +0000 UTC]
pfff originality sucks I know but I wanted bubbas Raditz and Goku to have a sisterrr
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BH-Ouji In reply to Vegeebs [2017-09-20 09:56:03 +0000 UTC]
I already gave them 2 sisters, now counting her, it's 3
Maybe you should do Bardock's mother in law next
Or Nappa's mommy, based on the fansub, official translation, and french dub
Suggestions BTW ^^
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TUVGM [2017-09-17 23:21:00 +0000 UTC]
Cute character XD
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Vegeebs In reply to TUVGM [2017-09-17 23:38:31 +0000 UTC]
thank you! xD
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TUVGM In reply to Vegeebs [2017-09-17 23:46:39 +0000 UTC]
Ur welcome!
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Eternal-Stardust [2017-09-17 16:11:50 +0000 UTC]
;-; Why does your cast of characters have such fucking sad stories?!?!?! Gah!!
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Vegeebs In reply to Eternal-Stardust [2017-09-17 19:27:51 +0000 UTC]
cause Im a horrible horrible person ;;---;;;;
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KensetSSDaydream [2017-09-07 20:39:44 +0000 UTC]
"And a cute and strong female saiyan comes to the fray!"
If you don't what the joke is, its from a scene from Team Four Stars Dragon Ball Z: Abridged where Piccolo plays dead from Dr. Gero's eye beam and he hears Vegeta saying his iconic "mine mine mine" lines while he kicks Android 19 in the face and Piccolo reacts by dropping his playing dead act and says "And the chronological a**hole comes to the fray!", but instead replace Vegeta with your OC and replace "the chronological a**hole" with "a cute and strong saiyan" in that sentence. Do you get the joke now, vegetagirl900?
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ZeDumbassDoctor [2017-09-03 14:10:21 +0000 UTC]
She's cute! But I'm not much of a fan of oc's that are kids to canon characters...i feel like it breaks way to much canon :/ But that is just my silly personal opinion XD
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Vegeebs In reply to ZeDumbassDoctor [2017-09-03 14:14:57 +0000 UTC]
thank you!
aah lol thats where youre wrong! she is not the daughter of canon characters. Both her parents are my oc's xD
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ZeDumbassDoctor In reply to Vegeebs [2017-09-03 15:02:39 +0000 UTC]
But it says her parents are Bardock and Gine...
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Vegeebs In reply to ZeDumbassDoctor [2017-09-03 17:58:11 +0000 UTC]
oh shit my bad...I was replying to comments to my most recently uploaded art of my oc and I thought your comment was on that xD
yes I created Komiri cause I wanted young Vegeta to have a little friend during his days living under Frieza. I later developed Komiri's character and made her Raditz's sister.
Well then what is the point in calling them "oc" or to be more specific,"fc" if they cant be connected to canon characters in some way? :/
I always liked oc's who were related to canon characters way more than regular oc's tho :U
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IzzySenpaiChan [2017-05-23 15:58:59 +0000 UTC]
WRITE THE WHOLE STORY DAMN YOU
I'M FASCINATED
I NEED A REASON TO LIVEEEEEEEE
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Vegeebs In reply to IzzySenpaiChan [2017-05-24 10:23:05 +0000 UTC]
OHOHO
unfortunately,Im too fckn lazy ;;;n;;;
bbutt I can tell you her story if ya want ewe
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Vegeebs In reply to IzzySenpaiChan [2017-05-25 05:07:27 +0000 UTC]
when senpai calls you senpai
AAAALRIGHTY
ahem once upon a time..no wait
I shall continue after she runs away ;u;
she runs away to a planet called Miyora (I named it like that cause idk why :v). She was extremely injured from fighting off Zarbon during her escape so yea..she kinda crash landed unconscious. She wakes up and finds herself covered in bandages . she wakes up learns that the planet is inhabited by small,long eared creatures with distinctive marks on their cheeks (LIKE THE ONE NEGI HAS!).They are called Miyorians. Being evil and all that, her first instinct was to kill and torture everybody until she calmed down ;n;. She almost destroys everything,until someone stops her. It was another saiyan who to her surprise looked exactly like vegeta >D. she fights him anyway but is easily defeated and is gravely injured once again.She learns that the saiyan (his names Sarade and he is the guy with a lot of scars 'u') is actually supposed to be Vegeta's long lost step-brother (hes like 10 years older than vegeta XD).
so these fights between her and sarade go on for a while until she finally gives up and asks him how he got to be so strong. She discovers that Sarade was a super saiyan and she immediately begs him to teach her how to be one. he refuses at first cause he wasnt going to forgive her for killing his friends that easily. Komiri apologizes (she pretends XD) and promises to change her ways if he teaches her.
and so he does XD
bla bla bla they train together and stuff and she also meets another saiyan (more accurately,a saiyan-icejin hybrid) who's been living there in secret.OHOHO THIS IS NEGI BBY >'D.
she gets pissed after a while cause she couldnt become a super saiyan even with all that training with Sarade. Sarade tells her to be patient and she doesnt argue cause shes afraid he might not continue to train her and hes far more powerful than her too.
stuff happens blablabla Komiri begins to actually like it there and she does change for the better, by Sarade's influence ofc (who falls for her head over heels ohoHO).
Komiri had a weak moment where she revealed her childhood stories to him one day...and ahEM..stuff happens and.....they do it
this is probably how it happened between Vegeta and Bulma lol XDDDDDD their love stories are pretty similar ;u;
BUT ANYWAY, Komiri gets pregnant ;A;
she gives birth to a baby boy and Sarade names him Kiharo. Komiri FINALLY admits she loves Sarade back (yeh XD).
years pass, Kiharo grows up, they live a happy life (Komiri completely forgets about her goal to be a super saiyan lol).
then..hmm well idk how to connect this..but its a long story, Ill just tell you that the guy who created Negi apperently was still alive and hunts Negi down to planet Miyora (lemme add that Negi,Sarade and Komiri are good friends now uwu and have officially become protectors of the peaceful planet of Miyora).
So Negi's creator was a saiyan but he somehow changed himself into a mutant with saiyan and icejin powers much greater than Negi's.
so bad shit happens
he kills Sarade and even their son Kiharo (who was only 5) . THIS is when Komiri goes super saiyan for the first time,but she still wasnt powerful enough and is gravely injured (more like knocked unconscious). The planet was about to be destroyed by youknowwho (I havent thought of a name for Negi's creator yet lol) when an injured Negi steps up but realizes hes too late to save anybody...except Komiri who was lying a few paces from him. Since he was out of options,he picks up Komiri ,gets on the first space pod he finds and escapes minutes before the planet's destruction (Youknowwho survives the explosion ;n; ). They escape to the planet where Tarble (vegetas younger brother) lives .Sarade used to visit his little brother a lot so Negi decides to go there since they dont have any other places to go.
SO YEH blablabla stuff happens,life goes on,Komiri lives a life full of despair with Negi and Tarble (shes tried to kill herself sometimes out of depression ;;;;n;;;; ).
then like 15 or so years later, youknowwho finds them and comes back to kill them for good. Komiri learns from Tarble that Vegeta was alive (she thought he was dead) and they both decide to run to him for help (Negi stays back to give them a chance to escape). They head to Earth.
so yea you can probably predict the story from here XD
she finds out she has a younger brother named Kakarot (she never knew of his existance since goku was born on the day of planet vegetas explosion and she was busy repairing space pods on Frieza's ship when it happened. For some reason, Radit never told her about his existance either). She thought Goku was her father when she saw him first cause of pffft how similar he looks to Bardock XD.
so yeh blabla the z gang (with Negi too ;w; he somehow survived) helps her fight and defeat youknowwho (who gets much more powerful over the years) but unfortunately, Komiri dies during the fight, but before her death, she asks her brother not to revive her with the dragonballs cause she wants to be with her husband and son in other world. ;w;
you might be wondering "why not revive her entire family then?". well idk if you know this, but I heard that you cant revive someone with the dragonballs after a certain limit of time (so ye Sarade and Kiharo cant be revived ;n; ).
Negi and Tarble go back to their planet (after they revive everyone who died there with the dragonballs ofc yuy).
SO YE THATS IT >'D
OHOHO THIS IS MY SECOND LONGEST COMMENT FOR TODAYYYYYY
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Sam-Baten In reply to Vegeebs [2017-06-21 18:49:31 +0000 UTC]
O_O my god !!! idk how to react !
this's one hell of a story !
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Vegeebs In reply to Sam-Baten [2017-06-21 21:32:48 +0000 UTC]
Komiri has had a sad life
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IzzySenpaiChan In reply to Vegeebs [2017-06-11 18:59:19 +0000 UTC]
my heart
it
it hurts
I-
...
...
god damn your just as dark as me
hmmm
I like you
WHAT AN ELABORATE STORY QAQ
I MUST KNOW EVERY DETAIL
WRITE THIS IN STORY FORM
GIVE YOUKNOWWHO A NAME AND DESIGN
I NEED MOOOOAAAAARRRRRR
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Vegeebs In reply to IzzySenpaiChan [2017-06-12 09:03:58 +0000 UTC]
///hurts withyu
ya I have no other life than to think of really sad life stories fml ;n;
yesss we shall be edgy together YwY
LMAO I TOO DARN LAZEH
I shit at coming up with names lmfao
I am open to suggestions
bbutt
Im making a ref for Kiharo soon ewe
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IzzySenpaiChan In reply to Vegeebs [2017-06-12 19:57:51 +0000 UTC]
//crais
dude
if you see what story I just wrote
mm
we are dark story sisters
EDGELORDS
DO IT WHEN YOU'RE NOT LAZEH
it's okay same
shit dude I would but you have fantasy I can only think of realistic names because that's all I do |"D
OOOOHHHHH HAPPY DAYS ARE UPON US QWQ
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Vegeebs In reply to IzzySenpaiChan [2017-06-13 18:44:08 +0000 UTC]
///wipes tear
dude
you have got to tell meh IT
EDGELORDS FOR LUYF
I AM NEVER NOT LAZEHH >~<
eh tsokay fammu you come up with such good names tho ;;;;
YASSS ;;A;;
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IzzySenpaiChan In reply to Vegeebs [2017-06-14 00:21:02 +0000 UTC]
/////bAWLS
it'll be on fanfiction when I get my computer back-
OH YES YES *STARSET BLASTS IN BACKGROUND*
WELL DO IT WHEN YOU'RE MOTIVATED
OH THANK YOU ;;;;; YOU DO TOOOO!!! SO I BELIEVE IN YOU TO MAKE AN AWESOME NAME <3
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Gukassj3 [2017-05-19 17:29:28 +0000 UTC]
perfect .0.
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Vegeebs In reply to Gukassj3 [2017-05-20 20:17:32 +0000 UTC]
andbahd thank youuu !A!//
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Gukassj3 In reply to Vegeebs [2017-05-20 21:20:25 +0000 UTC]
you're welcome !!! : D
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TeaNCooki [2017-02-27 20:23:47 +0000 UTC]
huehuehue I've finally find yer oc
her story is sho sad, feel sorry for Bardock
also...
REVEAL YOUR OTHER OCS WOMANN
*puts her in ma list* 💕
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Vegeebs In reply to TeaNCooki [2017-03-01 04:58:12 +0000 UTC]
ANDD SO HAF I
I have a horrible habit of making my OCs suffer kms
I haven't even mentioned the worst part of her story yet
YASSS I SHALL BOO when procrastination ceases to possess me
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N7warrior007 [2017-02-25 15:00:20 +0000 UTC]
Awesome oc
Mizuna:I have a sister? Awesome!!! *hugs her* maybe another timeline or whatever but still a sister yay!
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Vegeebs In reply to N7warrior007 [2017-02-25 16:13:59 +0000 UTC]
ty ty x3
Komiri-*winces uncomfortably* sister? Im sorry I don't have any sister. I have only two brothers.
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N7warrior007 In reply to Vegeebs [2017-02-25 16:21:27 +0000 UTC]
(n7warrior007.deviantart.com/ar… )
Mizuna:I was sent away for my saftey as a new born. But The easiest way to explain is I'm not your sister in ways. I'm from a different time line. I guess in ways I'm my timeline's you
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Vegeebs In reply to N7warrior007 [2017-02-25 16:28:20 +0000 UTC]
Komiri-So you are froma different universe? I wasnt sent away. I began working under Frieza ever since I was 14.
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N7warrior007 In reply to Vegeebs [2017-02-25 16:32:45 +0000 UTC]
Mizuna:I think your older too. I was born the same day as Vegeta but people got scared. Because my power level at birth was immense. 40,000 king ordered. My execution so my parents with the King's eldest son's zoom help got me away to a safe planet to be trained
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Vegeebs In reply to N7warrior007 [2017-02-25 16:40:19 +0000 UTC]
Komiri- Oh...Im eight years older than Vegeta. My power level was pretty high at birth too..but it wasnt anything serious.It was just right to make any saiyan father proud.My father Bardock trained me and when I was at the age of 14, planet Vegetasei was affiliated with the Icejin empire. Frieza saw my talent and took me in.On that same day, my home planet was destroyed by that same filthy lizard. I thought I was alone on that god forsaken ship full of pirates who stare at you like you're a piece of meat just because you're the female on the ship.My brother Raditz never took notice of me.He never really cared. But later,I found some weird friendship with five year old Vegeta.
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N7warrior007 In reply to Vegeebs [2017-02-25 16:44:55 +0000 UTC]
Mizuna:Well...I'm a legendary ssj. It annoys me though when people at first glance call me a 'broly with boobs when I'm so much more. I had to cope with what I've done in that berserker state. I didn't meet my parents till they got revived. Frieza is really complicated...technically he's my father in law
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Vegeebs In reply to N7warrior007 [2017-02-26 04:25:23 +0000 UTC]
Komiri- haha thats hilarious...Broly with boobs? I can hardly imagine that. I'd met that blood thirsty bastard while I was running away from Friezas ship. Boy he was only eight years old then but could still manage to break a few of my ribs.
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N7warrior007 In reply to Vegeebs [2017-02-26 09:39:43 +0000 UTC]
Mizuna:Well wanna see?
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Vegeebs In reply to N7warrior007 [2017-02-26 09:47:57 +0000 UTC]
Komiri- see what? Your legendary form?
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N7warrior007 In reply to Vegeebs [2017-02-26 09:52:14 +0000 UTC]
Mizuna:Yup. Don't worry I've control of it...most of the time anyway
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Vegeebs In reply to N7warrior007 [2017-02-26 10:06:30 +0000 UTC]
Komiri- nah its fine. Im much more powerful than Broly now.
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N7warrior007 In reply to Vegeebs [2017-02-26 10:08:04 +0000 UTC]
Mizuna:So am I. I got God version of lssj
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Vegeebs In reply to N7warrior007 [2017-02-26 10:09:01 +0000 UTC]
Komiri- a God? No...that's not possible. Only my brothers Kakarot and Vegeta possess God ki.
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