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Published: 2012-05-29 18:18:11 +0000 UTC; Views: 1031; Favourites: 55; Downloads: 26
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Uncoloured: [link]yeh, I'm on a Vinyl Scratch Trip
lately...
Someone tell me what else to draw! ;^;
(but, srsly)
DJ Pon3 belongs to and
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I cannot ever look at Scratch without thinking the word "Rambunctious"
That is all.
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Would you take constructive criticism? I love this piece but i love to help people reach there full potential. And yes i realize its a style and i would really love to help
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yes, I would take constructive criticism! ^^
go right ahead, I'd be interested to hear
what you think
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Alright. One thing to take note of is that i am guessing that the sharp and clean look is your style. Taking that in to account i can point out a few things.
If you look at her back leg that is almost fully showing, it almost looks as if its not a joint due to the fact that the line that goes up and continues to around the middle of the rear is missing. I also noticed with the same leg that the rear most line curves the wrong way ( getting bigger near the bottom.) and that its almost as if that one leg is a side view while the rest is from the angle.
The other thing i noticed was her front most leg is a little odd looking as it almost looks square, I would suggest making the front most line a little longer and making it look a little more like the background front leg.
Other then that this picture is well done and i really hope to see more work and art from you. Hope this helps!
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humm, I can see your points...
stay tuned, I might try and redo
this picture ^^
(and thanks for the criticism )
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Alright. I'll be here later but for now... I need to get to school because Exam review is calling me. Glad i could be of help!
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okiedokielokie!
(I'm not quite sure what an exam review is,
but good luck with it )
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I wasn't sure about this, but it actually came out great after you colored it.
GJ
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Sort of speaks to me as a response to some sort of musical challenge, the stand up and, "Oh, it is ON!" type of deal. Excellent stuff, heh.
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thank you!
yep, that was the
idea ^^
it's just a shame that I couldn't draw a DJ pult for her to battle on...
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That would be pretty fantastic, I must say.
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The phrase "feisty & combat-ready" comes to mind...
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now all that's missing is an actual DJ-pult to wubwub on ^^
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