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Published: 2012-02-27 10:48:09 +0000 UTC; Views: 5435; Favourites: 29; Downloads: 25
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Okay so here is page 06.Notice those are not statues. they are just unimportant figures (mostly cameos from the tv series and game)
BTW, i inserted modified joke of MOnkey island here
the vs sprite
VS
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let's hope I can get page 07 faster because the fight is not over yet
As usual, comments and critics please...
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the fire
it burn!
IT BUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUuuuurns!!!
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LOL XD
(but... why Servine says Shiny in the last panel?)
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lol it is still not accustomed to is evolved name
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lolol thats why y'all can't make a crowd around a pokemon battle hehe.
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yeah, funny how in pokemon anime
Attack that would hit the trainer would be drawn into the sky or dragged by the earth
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good thing it's not the anime this time.
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Lolz sorry
English is not my first language
if you see any error
feel free to let me know
I will fix it asap if I still can
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No really your English is better than most Americans' XD
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Leech seed: the perfect attack for when you want to sneak some health from your opponent.
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eeyuuuppp
perfect for the stalling snake
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Ah-ha! >: D It is her!
I like your color blending in the dialogue box when Lauren and Jade spoke together.
Damn, Ariadne evolved Arthur already? : o
So, do you have any character assigned to a certain role to determine when battles happen? (For example, you would fight Cheren in-game, so you would fight Ariadne in-comic or something like that.)
Leech Seed! : D That was my favorite attack growing up.
I totally didn't think for a second those people were statues. XD
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Not really,
as you asked before,
those are just mainly connected to teh story
and who is the story centered at that point.
lol statues
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oh man, tricky conniver with those leech seeds, love how you did that, and the battle turned out so cool XD
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Really great page. I like the idea of three separate Nuzlocke's at the same time but I will say it makes things a tad bit confusing but I enjoy it nonetheless.
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Thanks,
can I also ask a specific part that makes it more confusing? I'll try to work that out in the story.
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I'd say its the jumping around from character to character and what they are all doing because it seems like one will be doing something and then it will jump to another. Almost like cliffhangers but never quite explaining with the breaks.
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Oh i see the problem.
Mostly I will explain what other characters are doing, either by dialog, flashback or several other methods. Also, sometimes the characters will travel together.
FOr the time being Anything that happened so far is only(as mentioned in page 5) : Ariadna just won against the Striaton gym leader and her Snivy, Arthur, just evolved.
BUt hey this is nuzlocke run... we don't see every specific details right? what's more mine is made to be more like a story.
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Oh ok. Thank you for clearing that up.
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anytime!
if there is any question and comment just say,
I'll be glad to answer and fix my ways, hahahaha
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Yes, I also simply love the idea of combining more nuzlocke runs in one. The only problem, in my opinion, is that jumping from one to another character. For me, it's too quick. I can't say for others but I think it would be less confusing if you keep story focused on one character a bit longer. Let them to develop relationship with their Pokemon and polish themselves as young people. Now they appear to have really different personalities and that's why we need to meet them when they are alone.
Just constructive critic, it doesn't mean it's absolute truth though. Maybe I'll get used to this quick jumping from one character to another with the time, I don't know.
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As I said in the lest line of my note : I love critics, bad ones are welcome, but constructive ones are most welcome!
The story is still very looooong.
And I want to establish them as a trio in the start....
taht's why I need to make them together as much as possible in the early part of this story.
DOn;t worry, (I think) I have save some space in the written scenario for their time alone and their development.
Thank you very much
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Somehow I suspected that you had that in mind (and that you still do). I still wanted to write this just in case so you don't go too far. Then, no worries
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Thanks, I love yours too, hahaha
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