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Velink β Pokemon J.A.L. Prolog redo1
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Published: 2012-09-25 18:05:07 +0000 UTC; Views: 13372; Favourites: 81; Downloads: 10
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So I decided to redo the prolog of my main run comic.This is the old version: velink.deviantart.com/art/NUzlβ¦
wonder if I have improved at all.....
I mad another mistake and ended up making similar mistake to my original page.....
Oh well,
since Organization Quantum will be an important element to the main story,
I use this opportunity to remind my reader that the three protagonist of my run are agents of a scientific organization on a mission.
Intro: fav.me/d4mfgpg
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eeyup XD
she is pursuer of knowledge after all
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so tempted to recite Team rocket's motto
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What is this? Creepy multi-irised kid turns into PokΓ©mon. Everything in your gallery is a horror story, isn't it?
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oh nah, those are their starter XD
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Were-PokΓ©mon? Is it like a gijinka run?
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nooo
those are just what is inside their pokeballs
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If this is the first page, can you put in a link to the second page? I can't follow it.
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Or simply click the last link (the one that is placed on the foremost bottom of the others )
it is where i put the "next" link
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ah?
just go to intro
any of it
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Is there suppose to be a link to the next page connected to the intros?
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oh, after, intros, go to rule, and then to cover
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Ok thanks hope to enjoy it
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This has been nipping at me for a while and I thought I'd finally get to reading your nuzlocke from start to current state properly.
Word of warning: I comment a lot so I apologize in advance for flooding your inbox (although you're likely to see this comment last :/ )
Oh there's a choice! hmmm.I pick redhead :v
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WOOOOO!!!
awesome!!
and no problem!!!
I highly appreciate your comments XD
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and the story will come back to teh organization again
slowly XD
thanks!
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Your other one was pretty cool I think, but this does top it. I just like how we're seeing a bit of the characters in action--sort of getting a glimspe of how they'll be behaving. And the updated PokΓ©mon designs just look plain kick-ass. XD
The symbol at the bottom reminds me of Azelf. :3
Does . . . does that person at the top have a Vanillite for a head? D:
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WHoaah! yess!! that person has vanilitte head lol!!!
that is symbol of Quantum, which also looks like the tail of Pokemon of knowledge, Uxie
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Oh my God! XD They must have been researching Bill's teleportation machine. XP
Oh whoops, mixed up my PokΓ©mon. 
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Lovely strip, very nice art, I should make Jordie try to draw more like this!
-Shiloh
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wow, thank you very much X )
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Think nothing of it, besides, I have a soft spot for totodiles.
-Shiloh
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Ahahahaha, so do one of my friend
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Doesn't everyone? It is like.. the best pokemon ever.
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ahahaha, agree.
I like more round Pokemons tho
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This organisation is creepy. :I
Despite that you did improved!
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Naah. It just makes me think of "training very awesome assassins geniuses with top percentage of everything. hurr
I forgot to tell you, Jade's Piplup looks so badass!
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lol, not really training the kids to be assassins
just training them to be field scientist who are ready for all kind of situations.
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for one thing, the old version doesn't zoom in enough to be entirely legible to me, so already big improvement here. 2nd, the use of a textured checkered back was a better choice, and the art is certainly better
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AH I see
yeah, sorry about that
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Really? thanks
I think I only improve on the pokemons on the last panels tho
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Ahahaha, I think the improvement is only on the three pokemon sin the last panel
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omg so much improvement!!
Love the backstory behind the characters.
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