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Published: 2009-06-12 04:31:32 +0000 UTC; Views: 60; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 1
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Description the doctor threw up
jesus christ kid all i need to know is do we need to amputate
the kid forced himself to look back
vomit and blood on him
yea it should just rust out in time
the soldier sighed and collapsed, relieved
the kid tried to sew up the wound

dead, the soldier regretted loving
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Comments: 5

synthwrr [2009-06-15 05:03:24 +0000 UTC]

RE-LAX
IT'S A GREAT POEM.
hahah you okay, man?

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velnon In reply to synthwrr [2009-06-20 00:34:18 +0000 UTC]

Oh I'm fine just frustrated...women...really...

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sandyrinky [2009-06-12 06:07:05 +0000 UTC]

Geez man, what's with the caps?

The ending is rather depressing.

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velnon In reply to sandyrinky [2009-06-20 00:34:35 +0000 UTC]

It sounded alot cooler in my head than when it came out it came out as garbage so you know frustrating

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sandyrinky In reply to velnon [2009-06-20 17:09:55 +0000 UTC]

I hate it when that happens D: Story of my life

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