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velnon — Tourniquet Man by-nc-sa
Published: 2008-01-22 01:41:54 +0000 UTC; Views: 88; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 0
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Description Joe trudged towards school. The walkway stretched out before him, a looping endless causeway. His breathed instantly crystallized and just as quickly melted in the stark December air.

A snowball glided into him
A soft thud waking him from the daydream rhythm of his pace.

Joe:
(looks around)

Ryan:
Go back home, towel head.

Joe:
Silence

Ryan:
WHAT THE FUCK IS WRONG WITH YOU SAID GET THE HELL OUT

Joe:
You know very well I’m Cambodian.

Ryan:
Do you know that I’m going to beat the shit out of you if you ever sass me like that again?

Joe:
(silence)

Ryan:
GODDAMNIT!

Ryan runs up to Joe and starts punching him – a fury propels his fists, something more than just teenage angst – a feeling of helplessness, too – a rage at an enemy with no territories, no boundaries – a rage at an enemy he can’t even find.

Ryan:
GIVE HIM BACK!

Ryan’s screams before more desperate and angry as he continues to beat Joe, eventually he tires himself out, and begins to cry.


Ryan:
Give back my dad…

Joe picks himself up, and gives Ryan a hard look.

Then Tourniquet Man leaves.
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Comments: 5

synthwrr [2008-02-02 02:44:35 +0000 UTC]

hahaha
Script? I think not.
But you have a nice way of turning things about.
A rollercoaster ride indeed.

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velnon In reply to synthwrr [2008-02-06 04:28:26 +0000 UTC]

yea...I think I might change it to a poem

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Yukari-Shinohara [2008-01-25 22:39:03 +0000 UTC]

"You know very well I’m Cambodian."

What made you decide to make him Cambodian? Lol.

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velnon In reply to Yukari-Shinohara [2008-01-28 22:19:27 +0000 UTC]

Oh he's based off a friend of mine named Joe who's cambodian. Their actions are different but yea...

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Yukari-Shinohara In reply to velnon [2008-02-01 22:07:57 +0000 UTC]

Ah.

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