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Published: 2009-05-07 02:31:57 +0000 UTC; Views: 63; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 2
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Description yesterday at the dentist-
indian man practiced polite
with mask scraped away in my mouth
all the teeth out
i didn't notice when
he put the lead vest on me
and x rayed my gaping orifice
.empty.showed the particles
splintering splattering shattering
in all directions.
crawled out took vicodin and tried to forget
i dead
my heart
empty
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Comments: 5

sandyrinky [2009-05-07 21:03:49 +0000 UTC]

Gross, I flipping hate the dentist. Thanks to your words on scraping teeth, I pretty much want to die now.

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velnon In reply to sandyrinky [2009-05-13 23:14:40 +0000 UTC]

I think you miss the point...jk

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synthwrr [2009-05-07 06:02:59 +0000 UTC]

That's most unfortunate and sad.

LOVE the images O.O

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velnon In reply to synthwrr [2009-05-13 23:15:06 +0000 UTC]

and check out the alliteration 6 lines from the end!

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synthwrr In reply to velnon [2009-05-15 16:05:32 +0000 UTC]

Yeahhh that works. Don't remember exactly what it was before but I loveee alliteration... i think that's what that's called...

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