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Venemous-Roses — Biggest Mistake
Published: 2005-05-29 01:02:04 +0000 UTC; Views: 94; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 3
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Your eyes are sunken in and darkYour lies are getting you nowhere
We've warned you about what could happen
Yet you complain your condition isn't fair
Pressing paper to dried up lips
Thinking this mistake makes you cool
Coughing constantly on everything
You're so much more than a fool
Lighting up makes you a man?
Slowly killing yourself is worth it?
I've realized your newfound weakness
I cringe when you start each coughing fit
You're nodding off and losing control
Simple trying has turned into an addiction
I won't stop warning you daily
I'll continue to ignore your weak contradictions
You've screwed up your life now, boy
There's absolutely no turning back
You've let peer pressure suck you in
Now you know my words are simply fact
Don't run to me for advice
I refuse to give it anymore
You didn't listen to me anyway
Now I'll do the same and settle the score
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Comments: 6
I hate it when people smoke... your poem pretty much describes why
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Wow....that is very nice...Sadly, it's the truth as well. That's awesome though, I'll check out the rest of your gallery
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Thanks! ^^ The poem is actually based on someone I know, so it makes it more special to me. I think I actually did an ok job on this one.
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