Comments: 9
Frodo55 [2011-09-24 00:48:04 +0000 UTC]
Wow! This is such a deep, awesome poem!!!
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scruffyreader7 [2011-05-10 02:59:15 +0000 UTC]
don't love the first bit, the last half is inspired.
only thing any one needs to sit in the oval office, a swat team ready to mobilize, street maps covering all of Florida, a pot of coffee, twelve jammy dodgers, and a fez.
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helenofargos [2011-01-04 21:00:48 +0000 UTC]
Wonderful! (or as David would say, "Molto bene!") I love it. Whe wording is fantastic and you really do capture the 11th Doctor in this piece. The last line was particularly great, the sort of line that gives you a bit of the shivers. I can't write poetry very well, but I do know when I see something good.
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goRillA-iNK [2011-01-04 17:25:44 +0000 UTC]
This is very deep.
Over all this is a great lyrical description of it all.
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NikitaDarkstar [2011-01-03 22:06:58 +0000 UTC]
Yhea, it really doesn't sound like something he would say, but most likely something he'd think. Good work, it really does fit him.
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vertigoevie In reply to spirit-of-the-fire [2011-01-03 21:59:19 +0000 UTC]
Yup, get exactly what your'e talking about. :]
This song's more of that "introspective" self-talk kind of narrative song... thing.
XD
Thanks for commenting!
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