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VerumTee — Sparkling Shimmer - Ch2 - TDTCE - 24
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Published: 2018-10-17 04:00:03 +0000 UTC; Views: 17516; Favourites: 142; Downloads: 36
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"I didn't want you to think horse girls were easy."
"What is 'easy'?"
"This is easy."
(Of course, Horse Girls Are Easy really ought to be set in Equestria, but you work with what you've got.)
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Hehe, btw I loved every single comment you left on my pages. I just don't have the time or wit to reply to all of them.
Thank you so much though!
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I'm glad you appreciate my input.
I was giggling for fair amount of time over this particular joke.
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My reaction to this page:
First panel: media1.tenor.com/images/5ef87c…
Secon panel: media1.tenor.com/images/31a27a…
Third panel: media1.tenor.com/images/710eed…
Fourth panel: media1.tenor.com/images/068cbd…
Fifth panel: www.youtube.com/watch?v=P3ALwK…
Sixst panel: www.youtube.com/watch?v=WWaLxF…
Your comic is brilliant, watching You was a good decision! Heep up the good work!
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Hahaha those reactions are brilliant. :3
Thank you!
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Hello there I didn't know you were doing cameos I would have volunteered and loving the comic still😁👌
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I don't really do cameos. Was a spur of the moment.
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Oh okay so there not friends of yours or something right?
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I'm going have to ignore the Sci-Twi/Sunset shipper in me going SQUEEEEE over this moment and honestly say it looks more like she tried to kiss Sunset than really kiss her.. Even if it was on the cheek which was a lot closer to twilight's lips than Sunset's lips.. There should've been a bit more to it to pass as a real kiss. Now with that said I return to my shipping and say this.. Dang it Sunset!! You just had to spoil the moment with a moment of clarity..
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Yeah, she didn't actually kiss Sunset, she tried and Sunset backed away.
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I thought so!! But when I read the other comments I thought I was wrong.. You cannot blame me there without a little notice..LOL..
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good choice Sunset, super excited for the next page! //sobs dang cliffhangers
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Oh boy. I hope Fluttershy and Flash don't see them on the ferris wheel. Otherwise.....
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Oh you know they're going to be at the bottom to see a shocked Flash.
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Look at Spike's face, when Twilight kissed Sunset xD
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Oh yes she tried (: First I thought that Twilight kissed Sunset on the check xD
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Heh, yeah was a hard one to draw so I didn't quite get it as clear as I wanted it to be.
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Looks accurate to how it would be if it happened in actual EQG
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Right then Flash and Fluttershy happen to be walking past the ferris wheel. "Um, isn't that Twilight and Sunset?" "Hey, it is! Wait... what are they doing?"
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Ok Verum, you're going to have to tread very lightly on this next part. Sunset's reaction will either make-or-break her as a likable character.
I know you and a lot of other people are openly wishing for a Sunlight ship. I even get that that's what you're going for....
But if you're seriously going to have Sunset be okay with cheating on Flash like this, it's not going to work, from both a storytelling perspective or meta perspective.
From storytelling perspective Sunset basically was just using Flash as a crutch before someone better came along. Which in turn just makes her a despicable character.
From a meta perspective you just put them together so you could get in on the old-as-dirt Flash-bashing by having him get cheated on for no other reason than you want a Sunlightship to happen.
I'm just putting this out there now, because I genuinely want to like this comment, but if you're going to go into the direction I think you're going and have Sci-Twi get off scot-free while Sunset willingly ditches Flash for no other reason other than for your rushed ship to sail, then it's not going to look good on you as a writer in general.
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You'd almost wonder why the title isn't "Flashing Shimmer."
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.....that sounds dirty.
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I don’t think she’s technically got back with Flash yet, so it wouldn’t really be cheating
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Actually it is, considering the fact that by the time of this comic, all of this has occurred between the two:
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Sunset even calls it their "date night". So yes, they are technically together, and yes, it would be cheating.
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A date doesn’t automatically make them a couple again
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Pretty sure they're both treating it like it does.
Plus, a one-sided kiss doesn't automatically mean Twi and Sunset are together then, does it?
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Look, I never said I was an amazing writer, and I'm doing this FOR FREE and FOR FUN.
Still though, I don't think I'm going in the way that you're thinking exactly but we'll have to see when we get there.
But please, it's really hard to keep motivated on updating when you keep commenting like this on every page.
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I'm simply saying after the whole montage of them together you put so much work into, the fact of the matter is that it feels like you're letting your desire for Twilight and Sunset getting together eclipse the bad message this will be sending it she just suddenly dumps Flash the moments Sci-Twi is available.
And considering the amount of pages you said were left in this specific storyline, that means (from my perspective anyway) that either:
A) This will lead into a second storyline where Sunset approaches things maturely and tries to figure things out.
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B) The last remaining pages of this storyline will be the mother of all rushed endings where Flash gets the shaft for no other reason than "Twilight and Sunset belong together".
Again, I want to like this comic series, I really do, I even like Twi and Shimmer being shipped together. It's the METHOD of how you have them get together that's bugs me.
I don't mean to pressure you, but as a fellow writer I need to address that if you don't tread lightly and have your character make the right choices, it'll send all sorts of bad messages, as well as possibly come off as a little insulting to certain people who are invested in this story.
I'm saying this as someone who wants the story to go in the right direction: Be VERY careful with how you handle the conclusion to this story.
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I'm looking forward to each of your pages and I think you've done a great job so far.
I see how it all comes together.
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