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Fat bee queen, a concept that has never been done before and just brims with originality.

I actually was working on a completely different picture today as part of a story. However, as I wrote the story, I found that it was getting longer than I had anticipated. I decided I to instead try dividing the story up, with the first part focusing on this picture. This is the first time I've tried writing a story that just focuses on fat elements rather than my other weird nonsense so I'm interested in feedback as to whether or not its worth reading.

Story: www.deviantart.com/veryfilthyt…

Description
Fat bee queen, a concept that has never been done before and just brims with originality.

I actually was working on a completely different picture today as part of a story. However, as I wrote the story, I found that it was getting longer than I had anticipated. I decided I to instead try dividing the story up, with the first part focusing on this picture. This is the first time I've tried writing a story that just focuses on fat elements rather than my other weird nonsense so I'm interested in feedback as to whether or not its worth reading.

Story: www.deviantart.com/veryfilthyt…