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Description What lies heavy on her chest
and prevents her from breathing?

What makes tears unceasingly flow
from her tired, burning eyes?

What makes her heart beat
so arduously?

What turned a gorgeous spring
into a neverending, cold, dark winter?

What turned her gaily coloured world
into a grey, lifeless ocean of despair?

What turned her smile
into a grimace of pain?

What is there beyond the huge wall
that surrounds her
and keeps her apart from a joyful life?
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Comments: 12

Tazunee [2011-07-22 14:12:05 +0000 UTC]

Oh! Molto sentita...

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VeryGoodGirl57 In reply to Tazunee [2011-07-22 17:14:31 +0000 UTC]

E' vero...le mie poche poesie sono state scritte tutte col cuore gonfio di sentimenti ed emozioni, spesso di disperazione e dolore profondo...
Grazie Tazunee!

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Immuniselectrun [2009-07-04 14:06:42 +0000 UTC]

Whos? ^_^

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VeryGoodGirl57 In reply to Immuniselectrun [2009-07-04 14:45:08 +0000 UTC]

Me...it was one of my worst moments...not long ago
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Thank you

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Immuniselectrun In reply to VeryGoodGirl57 [2009-07-04 15:01:31 +0000 UTC]

^_^

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Nightpark [2009-05-02 20:38:56 +0000 UTC]

I bet "she" is bad-ass and when her time comes, she is going to show the world who she really is. And then all bad things that happened will be precious experiences and help her to enjoy her life in the future.
Who does not have some dark times? Life is there to stand up against such things.

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VeryGoodGirl57 In reply to Nightpark [2009-05-02 20:48:00 +0000 UTC]

"She" really appreciates your kind and friendly words...thank you indeed!

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Nightpark In reply to VeryGoodGirl57 [2009-05-02 20:51:45 +0000 UTC]

Anytime!

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JonnyGoodboy [2009-05-01 20:34:18 +0000 UTC]

One day she will get over that wall..and never,ever look back

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VeryGoodGirl57 In reply to JonnyGoodboy [2009-05-01 20:46:59 +0000 UTC]

yes...I want to trust you...she will do it, otherwise the end could only be tragic

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JonnyGoodboy In reply to VeryGoodGirl57 [2009-05-02 08:59:38 +0000 UTC]

No tragedy,she`s a big brave girl who will defeat the demons

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VeryGoodGirl57 In reply to JonnyGoodboy [2009-05-02 09:12:28 +0000 UTC]

We both know very well that "she" is "me"...Thank you for your help, Jonathan! I really need and appreciate it a lot cause I'm really feeling lost and scared, just like a child! I hope I'll be strong enough to dispel all the bad thoughts that more and more often invade my mind.

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