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vg-tails In reply to TheAverageCommenter [2012-07-02 03:01:29 +0000 UTC]

Because the girl is leaving, and goodbyes can be sad.

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yayleo In reply to vg-tails [2012-07-02 03:09:01 +0000 UTC]

Where she goin???

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vg-tails In reply to yayleo [2012-07-02 04:14:18 +0000 UTC]

She moved away.

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yayleo In reply to vg-tails [2012-07-02 05:58:56 +0000 UTC]

Huh, reminds me of my story a second chance.

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vg-tails In reply to yayleo [2012-07-02 14:48:05 +0000 UTC]

I just read chapter 1. It's really good! I'm glad you commented and I got the chance to read it.

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yayleo In reply to vg-tails [2012-07-02 14:51:47 +0000 UTC]

Read the prologue too! I'm really proud of it =3

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vg-tails In reply to yayleo [2012-07-02 15:25:44 +0000 UTC]

I'm actually reading it right now. I like it so far. ^_^

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yayleo In reply to vg-tails [2012-07-02 15:40:28 +0000 UTC]

Thanks :3 me and Matt put a lot of work in it.

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vg-tails In reply to yayleo [2012-07-03 10:47:52 +0000 UTC]

Very sad, but very well written. All around I loved it, it's really cool to see one my favorite comics taken and have a story like this put into place.
In prologue, you forgot an s in paragraph eight, it says "He stepped into the bathroom just a silently"
It shows how much work you guys put into it, and I can't wait to read chapter two whenever it comes out.

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yayleo In reply to vg-tails [2012-07-04 07:03:36 +0000 UTC]

Shoot! I didn't think anyone would notice that! Oh well, glad to hear you're liking it! This will be a rather interesting romance. It's straight-forward, mind you, but we've got some plot elements no one's ever came up with before, so we got really high hopes for it.

This is actually only one of two stories Matt and I are working together on. We got another one called "Kitten" you can find on his dA page, plus we've got an RP going on with out friends Bogren and DeepSeaAnchor that's just getting started

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