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Published: 2011-02-20 00:02:13 +0000 UTC; Views: 1947; Favourites: 10; Downloads: 13
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VS Eliot
IT'S THE SALVIDAR WOMAN GET IN THE CAR
AAAAN YET ANOTHER BIG BIG THANKS TO *AriadneArca FOR SCOTTIFYING AILEAN'S DIALOGUE.
Except for two lines I somehow omitted and didn't send her and I desperately tried to do something with them by myself but it probably didn't work I'M SORRY SCOTTISH PEOPLE.
Ailean Sailcirc (c) *ankishinzoutu
Marcel, Auber, Elizabeth (c) me
Katie (c) ~Katiefoxe
Kawaii Desu Ao-Kun is the twisted brainchild of ~Tofubeast and ~Captain-Feces
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Oh, the SUSPENSE!
And I think I caught on the few lines that you tried doing, but I think they're fine!
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Ao looks so adorable in your style XD So disgruntled.
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I'm sure it'll hit me in a few more hours and then I'll feel like the stupidest person on the planet,
but wats "Ao wean"?
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I figured tou had a scott insider. Translating his native tongue is complicated, but I eventually got the hang of it.
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Oh, interesting! You know, somehow it never occurred to me that, seeing as Elizabeth was around in time to catch the last of the Kyogre action, the legendary couldn't have been the reason that Elizabeth first showed up on the island... and the same stands for Lanson too. I just assumed they were drawn by the sinking-island-shenanigans. 
And, aaah, don't mention it, I was just happy to be of use!
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Gaaaaaaaaw what can I do to help with the series? I feel like I should at least offer to contribute something since I enjoy it so much.
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FEEDBACK!
If you feel there's anything that could use working on or should be somehow altered to make things clearer; pacing, dialogues, plot introduction, tones, angles, whatever, write away! I'm always open to critique and wanting to improve in comic-making. C:
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Well obviously that!
You could always make the text a wee bit bigger I guess, but I am not sure many would agree with me...
And the Scottish speak, while very fun to read, is sometimes a wee bit difficult to understand. Maybe a translation in the comment section if you think it is necessary for that amount of text.
(Also, I was secretly hoping to lend you an OC if you needed one. c: )
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W-why did I write that
How will I sleep tonight
sob
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