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Published: 2011-05-04 01:14:05 +0000 UTC; Views: 742; Favourites: 36; Downloads: 8
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Finished version of "Suki In Wonderland WIP"!! [link]See, I told you I'd upload the finished version.
I personally love this one. It might even be one of my favorites so far.
Yeah, I know it's not the most original concept, but I just had to try it with some of my "Welcome To My Life" characters!
The characters are as follows:
Suki, as "Alice" Shiro, as "The Cheshire Cat" Retsu, as "The White Rabbit" Anduro, as "Tweedle Dee/Dum" Satoshi, as "The Mad Hatter"~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
I chose Suki for Alice because, obviously, she's the heroine--and she's a blonde with blue eyes.
Not to mention I love coloring her outfits blue...
Shiro is the cheshire cat because, well, he just seems like he's somewhat catlike--and let's face it: he looks good in purple. 
Retsu was fated to be the white rabbit...mainly because he didn't seem to fit the part of the hatter. I think he's a cute rabbit though~ Anduro is one of the Tweedles simply because I couldn't think of another character from Alice in Wonderland. But hey, I think he suits the character--I actually really like how his hair looks next to the striped shirt.
I love all of their expressions, but I think Anduro has the most interesting face.
Please ignore the fact that Satoshi is not holding the cup he's drinking from.
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At first, I was going to make all of the background roses completely white, but I decided to use two different reds and silver instead. I really hope you like this picture!!
(I don't own Alice in Wonderland, or any of the characters~)
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Comments: 40
Wow
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Thank you so much!!! I'm so happy that I was actually able to inspire someone...
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Haha thank you,i think my version alice in wonderland will be a more darker take on things.
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Darker is always cool!
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This is so cute I had to add it to my favorites you rock at drawing!
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Aww thank you so much!!!! ;U; <333
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Dont mention it I just love the way you draw there hair its so detailed and pretty :3
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Aww thanks again!!! <3333
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You could try to use more shades, but anyways I think your art is nearly perfect *__*It deserves much more favourites!
It reminds me a lot of Arina Tanemura
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Yeah, I struggle with shades for some reason. 
And Arina Tanemura is one of my favorite artists, so that's probably why.
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Very nice drawing overall with a good feel to it. Colour choice is very good and melds together nicely across the picture, lineart is also very well done for the most part. All of the expressions on the characters look well done and the card aspect is a good way of adding in all the characters without taking up too much space and making the picture too cluttered.
In terms of what to improve on, the most obvious thing is Suki/Alice's hand. Compared to the rest of the piece it's nowhere near as well done, though I admit that hands are by far the hardest thing to draw and share your pain. Maybe look at some hand tutorials, but mainly just try to make sure the fingers link together well. The index finger on your hand is slightly too long, and due to the line of the middle finger looks a little like it's coming from too far back on the hand.
I'd also think a bit more about the background your going to use, the roses on the bottom and left side could use a little improvement but overall are a good idea and add to the piece. However, the rest of the background then feels a bit bland by comparison. Also, due to the fact you drew the two thorny stems at the top right but nothing else, it feels a little like you started to add more to the background and then stopped.
I also agree with everything Kyonehilbert said about slimming some areas down, and would also like to add to it that you should be slightly more careful when adding folds and creases to clothes. At the moment it feel they're there because you felt they should be, rather than because they actually are. When you put creases in clothes try and imagine how the shape of the clothing would have changed because of it. Draw the creases with the clothing, don't just add them in afterwards.
Anyway, overall this is very good work with a nice style that at the moment doesn't feel too similar to everything else done in slightly manga/esque fashion (make sure you don't lose that individuality!). Looking forward to seeing more from you and well done ^^
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I definitely agree about the hands--not to mention everything else.
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It's a pleasure ^^ and keep up the good work. I think you have a lot of potential so I want to see more XD
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Thank you so much!!! >w< I'll do my best!!
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thinks that this critique is fair.
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this is nice but if you want my critique......make the hands slightly slimmer as well as the neck...and try drawing the body lightly before you draw the clothes because it makes the legs on Suki slightly out of place..and make her legs slimmer too her thighs look larger than they should be.
your eyes are wonderful and so are the faces. the roses make a nice touch and a bit of class like the real Alice in Wonderland has so you set the mood of the picture very nicely....^-^ Overall I like it!!!!
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Thank you so much!!
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Aw thats fine i critique for fun i like it. Try looking at your own hands to give you a pointer in drawing them kay!!? and as for the eyes, im a huge otaku so huge eyes are right up my alley.
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OMG!!!! its so awesome!!!!! especially shiro's expression!!! >w<~kyaaaaa!!!!!!!!
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Aww, thank you so much!!! I love Shiro's expression too!
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teehee... its particularly :33
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