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VictoryHaiku — Vertigo
Published: 2011-02-05 17:27:08 +0000 UTC; Views: 75; Favourites: 1; Downloads: 6
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Description The world whirled ceaselessly around me at a breakneck speed, smoothing itself into a blur that cocooned me in every hue imaginable. Caught up in the excitement, I flung my arms out and laughed.

I thought that it would never end. I hoped that it would never end. I wanted it to spin forever…

If it couldn't spin forever, I wanted it to at least end beautifully.

Please end beautifully…

Then the earth opened; it took me into its embrace. Then the world shattered, falling all around.

Falling...

...I could see a rainbow reflected in the broken shards of sky....
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Comments: 2

Teru-is-True [2011-02-05 17:56:23 +0000 UTC]

That...is a very interesting piece.

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VictoryHaiku In reply to Teru-is-True [2011-02-05 18:04:27 +0000 UTC]

It's... well... yeah.

Just... yeah. XD I dunno what to think of it either.

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