brainiac-777 [2011-07-07 03:20:50 +0000 UTC]
Tumbling further down this story it becomes even more difficult to know which way is up, and I find that so invigorating. The imagination really takes over and thanks to your impeccable use of imagery, I can very vividly see myself following the beast and seeing the remains of this castle. I feel a swelling of anticipation rising up inside myself as I wait to finish each word and move to hungrily devour the next. It has been a great while since I have so completely wanted to immerse myself in a story, to strive to understand everything the writer has for me. I wait, with great longing, for the next part of this journey.
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brainiac-777 In reply to VictoryHaiku [2011-07-07 03:44:37 +0000 UTC]
I love reading your stories. They make my day, truly they do. I was going for imitation, since it is the sincerest form of flattery.
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