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Chaotic-Tracy [2015-07-22 06:08:44 +0000 UTC]
May I please share this to tumblr?
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MyNameIsEzra [2014-09-05 17:42:22 +0000 UTC]
If I had to choose between Rowling and Wrong, I would always always choose Wrong. For pure madness.
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crimpsonlilly In reply to MyNameIsEzra [2015-03-07 01:03:29 +0000 UTC]
The fanfic has IMO far surpassed the original in this case!
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LiliesForSeverus [2013-10-31 00:25:07 +0000 UTC]
I need to read this at some point in time, don't I?
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Neferosha [2013-01-26 20:09:45 +0000 UTC]
Overall I think you did a pretty good job with this. I'm noticing a few things that you might not have been able to see on your laptop screen, but that ought to be something you can avoid in the future by using a certain method even if you can't actually see it. Namely, I can see some of his eyelashes over his eyebrows (along with the edge of the green on the eye to the right). To avoid that, try making a solid layer for your eyebrows on top of which you draw the individual eyebrow hairs (so like lay down a base of the shadow color so that it's totally opaque). And, of course, just make sure the eyebrow layers are over the eye layers.
Hair is tricky. Your base shape seems pretty good (especially on the left half of the drawing where you can't see the copy-paste you used to thicken it) and you're on the right track with how you're shading it. I am noticing, though, that your highlights don't seem to be interrupted with shadows. I would suggest doing the hair in sections such that the individual "chunks" of hair lay on top of one another and have an overlapped look. I'd bet you could even use the same shading method you did here, just sectioned out a bit. It'll probably be easier to explain this in person, so maybe next time we're hanging out drawing I'll try to describe it.
I think last I'd say is when you have symmetry in a drawing, don't be afraid to use copy-paste/rotate. If I were doing a drawing of this nature, I'd flip the lineart so that the basic eye/brow shapes were symmetrical. It looks like you did that for the glasses and they came out well.
On another note, I feel like the scar and the colors of the eyes work nicely, and I really like the texture you have on the eyebrows. The glass in the glasses reads nicely with the white sheen. I look forward to seeing what more you do with this kind of stuff.
(btw, how are these crits working for you? Are they a bit too long-winded? If so I can make a point to make them a bit shorter)
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KSilvershade [2013-01-21 14:14:18 +0000 UTC]
He is a PC, and they are wallpaper.
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Cradger [2013-01-14 20:10:45 +0000 UTC]
Perfection... Absolute perfection!
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viennalerough In reply to Cradger [2013-01-15 00:03:24 +0000 UTC]
Wow!! Thanks a lot! *blush*
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Marlacanroar [2013-01-14 13:51:52 +0000 UTC]
Oh MY GODS! Simple incredible!
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