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Published: 2009-10-24 02:57:49 +0000 UTC; Views: 3701; Favourites: 61; Downloads: 126
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Description This is one of seven commissions purchased from

This is set in Angel Falls

Lin is an OC by I'm just her herald, scribe, and purchaser of commissions........

Here is his posting of the picture: [link]

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Unlike most of the heroines and villains, Lin hasn't finalized her outfit. In fact, Lin muses as she's jogging in the park another day, she may never do so because she likes the flexibility of not having to wear the same thing every day.

During her patrol this day, as she was passing by an explorable cave for the kids in the park, she heard the battling of a couple of Supers above her. She didn't recognize either of them, but she was going to rectify that by flying up and introducing herself to both of them by breaking up the fight.... At least that was her plan until she heard the cries of some children in the cave who went in there to take shelter from the battle. She decided that they were much more important than involving herself in that fight.

She kept the kids safe inside away from the fight, until she heard a *CRASH* which meant that one of the Supers had landed into the hillside. The force of the impact was so much that the cave was starting to collapse! She immediately yelled for the kids to Get Out Of The Cave! All of the kids managed to do so, except for a little girl who tripped and was carrying a stuffed penguin, crying. Seeing that there was no time to lose, Lin shielded the little girl's body with her own, and once the rocks started to fall, she put her hands up, caught a huge rock and held it above her head!

Lin used the largest rock that fell into her hands as a shield and platform so that none of the other rocks could come on top of her or the little girl. Once the rocks stopped falling she kindly asked little girl to leave the cave and head to the teacher who was passing by as the other children fled the cave and was taking care of them. Once the little girl left the cave, Lin stood up and pressed the rocks back up to the roof of the cave. She then concentrated her chi energy and slowly repaired the damage done, using her chi energy to fuse the rocks back together again. Once she was done, she stepped out of the cave a little tired, but satisfied at the job well done.

The teacher came up to her and started to thank Lin, "Thank you for saving these children, miss..." Lin then picked her head up to look at the teacher, "Lin Li Wong? Since when are you a Superhero?" Lin replied, "For a couple of months, now, and as a Superhero I'm called Fantastic Lin." The teacher looked up and down at Lin's body, her mouth a little agape once she saw how muscular that Lin was, "You certainly have earned that moniker today, Lin, both with your actions saving these kids, and in the fantastic shape that your body is in! In a few days, my school will have its Physical Fitness Day. I would like you to come to the school that day and help out with the festivities." Lin smiled and replied, "I would be glad to." The teacher gave Lin the schools name and address as well as it's phone number in case she needed to contact them for whatever reason. Once the teacher had taken the kids back to where they belonged, Lin let what had happened sink in. She definitely had to find out who those two Supers were, and who was on which side. Also, though, she was overjoyed that she was going to help out at a Physical Fitness Day a few days from now!

After Lin did a small leap of joy that easily had her peering over the rest of the park and after she floated back down to prevent any damage to the sidewalk, she resumed her patrol route...
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Comments: 11

MalfClaymore [2012-07-24 22:27:01 +0000 UTC]

OMG OMG OMG OMG *O* *p* *O* EPIC HEART AND HEAD SHOT!
*P* *O*

*died by climax* xDDD

She is SO AWSOME *o* *Died again*

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ShadowRx [2011-07-22 16:40:18 +0000 UTC]

I love how she's calm and trying to comfort the girl even as she holds a huge rock...

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19chucki74 [2010-06-22 14:45:15 +0000 UTC]

A hero in more than one sense. Love it.

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downgrade89 [2009-10-26 18:11:47 +0000 UTC]

now thats what i call a hero! hurray for Fantastic Lin!!

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vince3 In reply to downgrade89 [2009-10-26 18:22:03 +0000 UTC]

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Fishmeistercod [2009-10-26 15:13:26 +0000 UTC]

Go go Super-Sexy Lin!

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Paddy86 [2009-10-24 14:26:44 +0000 UTC]

Wow! Great action shot of Lin!

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hotrod5 [2009-10-24 12:07:42 +0000 UTC]

A variation in Fantastic Lin's outfit, nice.

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vince3 In reply to hotrod5 [2009-10-24 12:14:44 +0000 UTC]

Sean wanted to explore different outfits in the pictures, and I said that I wouldn't mind seeing it...

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lextoro7 [2009-10-24 10:37:06 +0000 UTC]

wow she is a hero that is good. good work

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thephoenixrisen [2009-10-24 06:43:25 +0000 UTC]

Love her strength!

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