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"Ripper, what the HELL was that?!" Scarlet shouted just as the two of them stepped outside castle. 

The two of them had exited through a servant entrance near the back of the castle, leading out into what could only have been described as a alley. Not a very menacing one sure, it was hard for anything to look menacing in this sparkly mess of a city, but still a rather dark and secluded spot. 

"I freezed! I drew a blank, I just couldn't tell them. I thought it would feel different with you there but then that whole thing about wanting to talk about something else just threw me off. I'm sorry for that "kiss" by the way. I swear I'll make it up to you, we just need to play a long for a little while longer until I can figure out how to tell them"

Scarlet kept staring at him with this strange look on her face. He couldn't really discern what it meant which worried him somewhat.

"C'mon, you're not mad are you?" He asked "As I said I'll make it up to you, I swear"

Still no reply. It was like she had spaced out or something. Stuck in her own thoughts.

"Scarlet?"

"I can't believe you" she mumbled through gritted teeth.

"What was that?" he asked now with some clear concern in his voice.

"This wasn't an accident was it?" Her voice had developed to a slight hiss "You planned to tell your parents that we were a couple, didn't you?!" 

Ripper was silent. The tone of her voice scared him as he didn't quite know how to answer. 

"You knew I was coming and saw an opportunity to fool them even further. Did you even care why I wanted to talk to you? Or better yet what I wanted to talk about?" She continued her voice escalating in force. 

"I... well, I..." 

Taking a deep breath to calm herself she looked him straight in the eyes and uttured. 

"You what Ripper?" 

He remained silent, her eyes still locked with his. This was a side he had never seen of her.

"Look me in the eyes and tell me, loud and clear, that this wasn't something you planned" 

Seconds felt like hours as they stood there, both frozen, just staring at eachother. Eventually Riposte broke their eye contact and looked down at the ground. 

"I'm sorry..." he peeped meekly, clearly threatened by her authorative stance.

She huffed angrily and turned her back to him, kicking the ground below her hooves.

"Damn you Ripper..." her voice was a bit shakier this time. "I thought I had you figured out. That you were just lost and confused. That you needed help... but I'm starting to think you don't actually want help. That you just get some fucking high out of doing this shit... out of tricking ponies!" She looked at him again with anger burning in her eyes. "Innocent fucking ponies!"

"w-what are you talking about?" he asked cautiously, this couldn't just have to do with what happened in the castle just now, could it? He would never have imagined her reaction being this extreme. 

"I know what you did to Honeycrisp, and probably many others" she said in a matter of fact tone. 

"Wait... who?" he asked confused but was suddenly surprised when a hoof collided with his face. 

The cloven hoof of Scarlet had hit him like lightning instantly knocking the wind out of him and leaving him laying on the ground. The sharp edges of her rock solid hoof sliced open a small slit in his lip and nostril as it passed on it's way to his eye. 
Blinking frenetically he tried to regain his sight as the blurry image of Scarlet standing over him came back into view. He winced pathetically as the pain suddenly registered. 

"What the hell Scarlet?!" He sputtered. 

"YOU DON'T EVEN REMEMBER HER NAME?!" Scarlet shouted back. "I can't believe I used to root for you! Are you going to forget me too after this?! Ponies aren't your tools to toy with because of your insecurities asshole! GOD what is so difficult for you, I just DON'T understand!" 

He winced once more as his eyes had started to swell. He spat out blood that had run down into his mouth as he answered her. 

"I just... I don't know what to do..." He huddled up a bit on the ground fearing for another punch. His eyes started to water.

She stared at him. Her frown loosening a bit but she still kept her harsh tone.

"Don't know what to do? YES YOU DO RIPPER! You bloody well know what to do, just come clean to everyone, and to yourself! Just stop USING ponies, stop using ME!"

"It's just..."

"WHY is it so difficult to just admit?! Nothing bad is going to happen! What are you afraid of? I really don't understand!"

"...."

"There are plenty of gay ponies in Equestria, it's nothing new. Your mother is the princess of love, LOVE for gods sake Ripper. She is probably the most accepting pony around. Your AUNT, Princess Twilight, IS GAY!" She paused as to make the words sink in "What is it that is so terrible about it?! Explain to me"

"BECAUSE I DON'T WANT TO BE!!!" He shouted. 

Birds that sat on the house roof beside them flew of, startled by the loud noise. An eerie silence fell over the alley, the only sound being heard was Riposte's sobbing as he was fully crying at this point. 

"what?" Scarlet asked in a much quieter tone than before. 

"I wish I wasn't..." Ripper peeped "I wish I could be the perfect prince like in the stories... valiant and brave... fighting to win the damsels heart... showing of my skills..." He hid his face in his hooves. "with every mare I sleep with I'm hoping it will be different. That I will just find the right one that makes it all feel "right", so that I can be that perfect prince and win my princess. But no matter what it always feels wrong. I just want it to end, to get out of there. To shower myself in scolding hot water to wash away the... shame" 

She stood silent.

"You changed that... that night we spent together was amazing. Nothing has every felt more right in my entire life... and I hate it..."

Scarlet sighed deeply and walked up to the crying stallion. She knelt down and looked him in the eye once more, pondering weither or not to give him a hug. 

"Riposte" she started "I really want to help you... but you need to accept yourself first... and I can't help you with that" She stood up to turn her back on him as to show her disaproval. 
"I am still angry with you. This doesn't justify any of your despicable actions towards those poor mares, nor me. But I do believe that you can change, you just have to want to" she started to walk away from him, yet kept talking back to him. "prove that you are an honorable prince by doing what is right"

"Goodbye Ripper"

He looked after her like a kicked puppy. Not getting up to go after her nor shouting for her to come back, even tough he desperatly wanted to. He just lay there, watching her disapear out of sight. 


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Once back in the castle he was quickly spotted by a pair of guards. Both of them alarmed by the state of which he was in. 
One of the two ran to fetch the Princess that soon returned to see her baby boy's horrific black eye. 

"Oh my god Riposte! Who did this to you?" She hugged him tightly yet he hung limp in her grip barely even looking at her. 

"It's nothing mom, I just... fell down the castle stairs..."


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Welp... sorry for the delay. It's not quite what I imagined in my head (that ending goodbye got really wierd) but hey it's close enough to what I had in mind. 
I hope you enjoy the new dialouge.
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Comments: 111

zoeannaart62 [2019-03-12 23:57:12 +0000 UTC]

Karma roundhouse kicked Riposte in the face

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Nautilus18 [2018-10-22 10:13:56 +0000 UTC]

I wish Riposte got knocked out so this could happen: www.youtube.com/watch?v=a9z8F4…

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xandraclay [2018-08-21 18:03:44 +0000 UTC]

Your picture drew me in and I really enjoyed your story! You characters are well developed and REAL. Keep it up!

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Shiina-Mako-Chan [2017-08-01 00:31:46 +0000 UTC]

The truth will come out eventually right?

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ShastaWolf2 In reply to Shiina-Mako-Chan [2020-12-15 02:05:52 +0000 UTC]

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bp18531 In reply to Shiina-Mako-Chan [2019-02-24 18:17:50 +0000 UTC]

One day maybe one day

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Rand-dums [2017-07-15 00:54:55 +0000 UTC]

Maybe Scarlet should talk to Honeycrisp. Just maybe. 

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IHATEYOUALL114 [2017-05-30 14:27:07 +0000 UTC]

Hey Riposte? HOW DOES KARMA FEEL? XD

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MintyUniverse [2017-05-25 14:48:14 +0000 UTC]

I love the stories that come with the drawings. Please keep doing these.

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marinus18 [2017-03-02 21:23:28 +0000 UTC]

for somepony who hates him she still gives him quite a lot of advice.

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Vindhov In reply to marinus18 [2017-03-02 21:58:35 +0000 UTC]

She doesn't hate him, the two of them are practically best friends. She is just very, very angry with him right now

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marinus18 In reply to Vindhov [2017-03-04 18:49:16 +0000 UTC]

Yeah, I would think she would just gallop away and that she doesn't want to see him right now. Since they are best friends she would return to him later and do the lecture then but not right after he took advantage of her the way he did.

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Melani-Nexus [2017-02-16 12:54:40 +0000 UTC]

Good that I looked back, cause this story pic is so amazing! I loved all the dialogue and sincerely it was so good. I think the goodbye fell right in it's place, as if he doesn't change, he will never gonna see his "friend" again. Riposte needed to be knocked out of his hooves for good, and I hope he can change from this point onwards.  

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X-Mervielle-x [2017-02-13 04:49:40 +0000 UTC]

I don't know why but I love this picture a lot! I don't know if it's the lighting or the perspective but I just wanted to compliment it. I can really see pure emotion and I really applaud artists like this.

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Vindhov In reply to X-Mervielle-x [2017-02-13 21:06:34 +0000 UTC]

Thank you <3

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CitrusEucalyptus [2017-02-12 04:00:04 +0000 UTC]

Well, Riposte, you had this coming to you for a LONG time.

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sayonaraShrimp [2017-02-09 15:38:15 +0000 UTC]

uGh this huRt my HEart
but like inkwell, he needed a slap
now he needs a hug :,(

ugh your characters make me si coNFLICTED
theyre so reAL

honesty ur ng has the most like
personality ive seen in almost any
seriously just???
idk

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Doctorwholovesthe80s [2017-02-09 04:17:08 +0000 UTC]

This was an EXCELLENT scene! I'm so glad that someone just told Riposte straight out that he's messed up and needs to seriously come clean or things'll get worse.

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NarrowGosling02 [2017-02-07 19:43:43 +0000 UTC]

Nah!

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TheNewDay [2017-02-07 01:15:11 +0000 UTC]

"Sparkly mess of a city" I laughed at this. Also, sometimes you gotta resort to tough love to get a point across. 

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Vindhov In reply to TheNewDay [2017-02-07 22:02:13 +0000 UTC]

I keep imagining everyone getting blinded on really sunny days because of all the crystal surfaces.

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TheNewDay In reply to Vindhov [2017-02-07 22:07:30 +0000 UTC]

I bet all the souvenir shops make a killing on sunglasses. 

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DawnsyBebo [2017-02-06 20:18:20 +0000 UTC]

Ah buddy. It had to be done. Now you've got it! You can still be that knight in shining armor for a lucky stallion  

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InsolenceIncarnate [2017-02-06 20:03:14 +0000 UTC]

Most likely, Riposte will wait for that to heal (or cover it with a spell) before doing anything too public, but I think it would be kind of funny if Cheerilee found out about Riposte getting injured (tabloids maybe?) and Twig winds up having to try and explain that it really wasn't him who did it.

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JackalyenMystique [2017-02-06 06:11:38 +0000 UTC]

I actually do feel a bit bad for Riposte, but like Scarlet said that doesn't excuse his behavior.

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Fynn-Bernsteinwolf [2017-02-06 05:19:42 +0000 UTC]

I just love this NextGen, it's in my opinion one of the best, with the best storytelling and the best storyline.

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Vindhov In reply to Fynn-Bernsteinwolf [2017-02-07 22:02:49 +0000 UTC]

Thank you <3

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Fynn-Bernsteinwolf In reply to Vindhov [2017-02-07 22:06:54 +0000 UTC]

you're welcome^^

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StormxDestiny [2017-02-06 00:35:52 +0000 UTC]

Please learn something from this riposte my GAWD! XD

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rezo55555 [2017-02-05 23:38:29 +0000 UTC]

What, if Twilight is gay, why is she married to Sunburst?

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tdarksideofthefandom In reply to rezo55555 [2017-02-06 02:51:06 +0000 UTC]

Yeah, she is with starlight now, if I recall correctly. (Also divorced flash previous to sunburst)

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Nightynoodles In reply to rezo55555 [2017-02-06 00:04:14 +0000 UTC]

Twilight divorced Sunburst

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Celestinavigator [2017-02-05 23:06:17 +0000 UTC]

To hug and cry.
But better to punch him in another eye.

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QuakingAspens [2017-02-05 22:42:14 +0000 UTC]

I love this so much more. I hope he takes her advice

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Titanic-Wyvern [2017-02-05 22:40:59 +0000 UTC]

Ouch, that had to hurt, but I can't say that I feel too sorry for Riposte. Was it right of Scarlet to hit him? Probably not. Did Riposte deserve it? Yes, but violence isn't usually the answer. Riposte has no right to act the way he did, using those mares and discarding them like broken toys just to 'feel' something other then being gay and in denial. Being in the closet is a hellish experience, though I can only speak from what I've heard from others, not from my own experience, but Riposte would be accepted so easily by his family. For christ's sake, his mother is the Alicorn of Love, and his Aunt Twilight is gay! 

Sometimes life needs to give you a smack to the face for you to realize that what you've been doing is crappy, especially if you're being an absolute shitbag to others, and Riposte got it here. Violence is never usually the answer, but sometimes you need it to happen. 

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sketchymetal [2017-02-05 22:38:49 +0000 UTC]

Amazing writing as always!

I can't wait to see what you make next!

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ZoieSnyder [2017-02-05 22:35:15 +0000 UTC]

His fault, she'd probably still be mad at him for using Honey and those other mares yes, but she probably wouldn't have punched him if he didn't use her as a scape goat

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SilverStarStrike [2017-02-05 22:34:12 +0000 UTC]

While I am angry at Riposte, I somewhat do know where he's coming from. Don't get me wrong, what he did to those mares wasn't nice at all and using his best friend to hide his real sexual orientation. Even though I'm not gay myself, I did feel ashamed of being straight because most of my closest friends were like trans or gay or bi, making them "special" in my eyes. I felt out of place and ashamed of belong to a sexual orientation that is probably what looked down to the others. Of course I never did use others to try to pretend I'm not straight, but the shame is still kinda there. It didn't help that this one guy (I won't name names) told me feeling ashamed because I'm straight is a stupid feeling. I'm more on Scarlet's side though...but I still know how it feels to be ashamed of my orientation, but I do have friends and family who make me feel better about myself.

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Themasterofcha [2017-02-04 23:14:21 +0000 UTC]

Hmmmmm, trying to decide whether or not to be happy that he got punched or feel pity for him.

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Vindhov In reply to Themasterofcha [2017-02-05 20:39:00 +0000 UTC]

Why not both? 

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Nautilus18 [2017-02-04 03:13:50 +0000 UTC]

I know from experience what it's like to get knocked down to the ground as hard as possible by someone.

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QuakingAspens [2017-02-04 03:02:03 +0000 UTC]

I know from personal experience that being in the closet is difficult, and that it can be difficult to cope, but Riposte had no right to act the way he did. On the other hoof, violence isn't the answer. Maybe this will at the very least teach them both something.

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Heartpawphoenix16 [2017-02-03 04:22:39 +0000 UTC]

*helps him up*are you okay?!? do I need get help?!*yells*somepony help!!!!!!

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AshCatArts [2017-02-02 22:28:37 +0000 UTC]

I am so eager for the dialogue. PLZ 

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DingoBreath [2017-02-02 19:15:12 +0000 UTC]

he definitely deserved that...i get being closeted but he hurt A LOT of ponies. he didn't look at the bigger picture and realize no one cares if he's gay or not...especially his parents and ponies he knows, because I'm sure a few of them are gay themselves.

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Lady-Limule [2017-02-02 18:29:02 +0000 UTC]

Don't mess with a Roller derby girl dude ! They are terrifying.
By the way, interesting angle vision here. And again the symbolic light^^I like that <3

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KiattyKatty [2017-02-02 17:11:37 +0000 UTC]

THAT'S WHAT YOU GET YOU DOUCHE BAGGG

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WilloByte [2017-02-02 15:07:31 +0000 UTC]

My mind immediately went to "congratulation" from hamilton.

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MemeFish [2017-02-02 13:27:33 +0000 UTC]

THEORY?? Later Riposte will tell his parents that he is homosexual and they will think that he was hit because of his different orientation. Welp.
No really dude. They are your parents, your mother is Alicorn of motherfuckin Love. They will understand and maybe will help you (maybe if they foung out what he did to Honey then they will be really upset, but pliz). Okay, I guess that his sisters WOULD make jokes on him (bc he was ... bad, so now they will be bad for him nah), but Cadance will shut them down as well (like "Dont make fun of his gayness gurls." or sth).
*inhale* Now Riposte must look out for a ... boyfriend by himself. OH WELL. Yes no maybe so.

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ooReiko [2017-02-02 10:08:07 +0000 UTC]

aww beautiful art <3

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