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jelle1218 [2010-07-06 03:55:50 +0000 UTC]

I'm not a premium member so I will write a critique in this comment .

First of all, I think the colors you used were very nice. Everything seems to fit together very well. The leaves give me that autumn-fun feeling and the outfit gives me the more spring-summer time in the sun feeling. The angle kind of confuses me (was that on purpose?). The thin stick is telling me that the angle was kind of slanted, you're telling me that the angle is very slanted, and the ground is telling me that it is slanted and having to look up. What kind of bothers me is that there is so much going on on the left, but nearly nothing on the right.
Vision:

The picture gives me a very warm feeling inside, which I like a lot. I haven't seen any picture like this!
Originality:

I like the way you used everything you could get to make tis picture feel so 'fun'. The only thing I have to say is that you could crop it. The right hand side bothers me a bit, and I don't think that's what you want your audience to focus on. On the top right-hand side I see a big chunk of sky that bothers me. And below it the plants are annoying me a bit. Apart from that, you really used what you could to make this picture such fun to look at!


Sorry that my critique is so long, but there's just 1 more paragraph. I really enjoyed looking at your picture. Just looking at it is fun. It reminds me of a party I had, and I really like the outdoor feel to it. I will remember this picture for a while, that's for sure!


Deviousness:

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