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vireosy In reply to eternanyx [2013-01-09 03:32:40 +0000 UTC]
Thank you so much for the critique! I really appreciate it.
As I said in the artists' comment, it was just a quick little drawing to get a simple idea down -- by no means was I trying to be perfect. In fact, what you call rocks is what I aimed to be looked at as foliage, so already I can tell that I've failed somewhat. The lighting, I believe, was meant to be more stark in contrast, but I also failed in that aspect by not putting more shadow behind the Mew.
I do agree that the white is a bit distracting, however. The mew should be the attention grabber, not the foliage surrounding it. I think it was meant to appear more as a soft glow -- still contrasting, but without a sharp edge, I suppose.
Also I feel the need to correct -- this was by no means drawn with chalk and charcoal. This particular piece is purely digital and done with a particular type of brush. This original "charcoal" drawing was done on one layer and then duplicated twice to play around with the contrast. I do think it is a bit much at times, but at least I was experimenting.
But yes, I really am glad that you critiqued! I can't ever get enough of those.
The harsher the better.
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vireosy In reply to eternanyx [2013-01-09 23:00:16 +0000 UTC]
No, please don't get me wrong, I take it as a huge compliment that my digital work sometimes comes off as traditional! It's hard to get one to look like the other.
I think my thought process was, "Mew... legendary, basically thought to be extinct... lives in South America... dense jungle-type setting... alone."
But thank you, once again! I was rather happy with how my little test turned out. ;u;
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Aanza [2013-01-08 07:25:32 +0000 UTC]
LOVE how this turned out! Excellent work, Susurra!
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vireosy In reply to Aanza [2013-01-09 03:20:31 +0000 UTC]
psh, thanks so much! ;u;
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Aanza In reply to vireosy [2013-01-09 18:43:08 +0000 UTC]
You're very welcome. C:
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RicochetWolf [2013-01-08 05:39:02 +0000 UTC]
Whoa! Super cool! C:
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