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VisceralGod In reply to ForlanceAbice1 [2013-02-15 00:26:23 +0000 UTC]

Ah, cool! I like the story too, so far~

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ForlanceAbice1 In reply to VisceralGod [2013-02-16 05:36:17 +0000 UTC]

Anything that you could possibly add as a critique?
I would like some of your suggestions as to where I could go from here.
Give some speculations as to where you think this story could be heading.
It helps me formalize and solidify the story's plot as I go along, giving me ideas as to what I should and shouldn't use, as well as to what I can utilize to surprise my readers.

Such as creating a bond between Spitfire and Applebloom as a possible foalsitter relationship, then somehow having Applebloom kidnapped by some ancient cult in Everfree forest, where Applejack and Spitfire then go to rescue her in some castle. Only when they do, they get ambushed, while Applejack is the one that is taken prisoner as the real target, all the while forcing Spitfire to fall back with a distraught Applebloom to Ponyville to get assistance, all the trying to comfort her and the Apple family, while trying to get a reign on her own emotions, trying not to think about what is being done to her marefriend Applejack, who is pretty much the only one in her life to see and appreciate her for the pony that she truly is, not the facade that is her Wonderbolt persona. Then finding out with abrupt horror as to what said cultists have done to wound Applejack, then going into an enraged frenzy on them for harming the mare who genuinely cared and loved the Captain for who she is, not her persona in public use.

And this is all speculation and brainstorming on my part. Who knows what I could possibly use? I am not afraid to force them into some pretty horrific experiences to strengthen the bond between the two loved ones, as well as the relationship between the reader and the story. If I am truly sadistic, I wouldn't even be above killing off one of the main characters, possibly turning into a tragedy or spin off if I keep the main characters alive in the main fanon. I just simply like being diverse, substituting my realities with even more of my own and others. I am not one who just has one main fanon universe, but multiple ones. I might actually even use Season 1 Fanon Luna's personality here instead of her canon one, giving me adoration for that particular character. Hey, I could actually relate to that Luna. She was cute with her abacus and socks you know! Paint me a sucker for angst and romance here.

Mind adding your own speculation here? It would be very much appreciated.

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VisceralGod In reply to ForlanceAbice1 [2012-12-19 20:14:39 +0000 UTC]

Ooh, cool! I'll be sure to join it! >w< You should as my friend *DeltaSenris to join, she loves this pairing too.

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ForlanceAbice1 In reply to VisceralGod [2012-12-20 18:58:37 +0000 UTC]

Done.
But we need to work hard in order for this ship to blossom.
I plan to collaborate with what few members that we can recruit to possible
make up a few pictures and fanfiction about this ship.

My own skills in artistry aren't bad per-say, but nothing notable.
My fanfiction is however a different story. I just need some help in coming up with
some creative brainstorming.

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VisceralGod In reply to cybercrimepunk [2012-12-01 05:34:40 +0000 UTC]

Yes, yes you did. That's why it's unoriginal for me. xD
I'm glad you do! It took me a while, but you know that already. xD

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