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Description Clearly poetry isn't my thing.

But I thought I'd give it a try and it did give me an excuse to use my sharpies. Hmm...fuuuumes.

Anyhow, this is visual poetry for =DailyLitDeviations 's One Year Anniversary Contest. I /really/ hope you guys can read my handwriting...
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Comments: 18

RuleLessWonder [2010-10-16 17:50:06 +0000 UTC]

Have you ever seen/read V for Vendetta? It has a theme along the lines of this, so I think you would really like it :] I just feel like this quote might go with this rather well:

"Die! Die! Why won't you die?!?"
"Because underneath this vest is more than just flesh. Underneath this vest is an idea. And ideas are bulletproof."

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xxxbWitch In reply to RuleLessWonder [2011-12-25 22:22:34 +0000 UTC]

made me think of that too!! Love the movie soo much.

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vital-organs In reply to RuleLessWonder [2010-10-17 04:16:33 +0000 UTC]

Oh, I LOVE that movie!! Well the first 4/5 of the movie, since I never saw the last part.

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RuleLessWonder In reply to vital-organs [2010-10-18 21:59:56 +0000 UTC]

That should be a crime! Great movie!

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TheScreamingNeedle [2010-07-27 07:07:34 +0000 UTC]

Beautiful! I especially love the little bit of paper glued over a former idea you didn't want to share with the world after all. Adds to the text, if you ask me.

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StrawberryRunner [2010-03-23 12:16:50 +0000 UTC]

That is soo cool! Its so mega awsome..im just blown away....

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FaithIS [2010-03-07 02:41:20 +0000 UTC]

the concept is amazing, im sure poetry is in ya.
i thought we had non addicting pencils?

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vital-organs In reply to FaithIS [2010-03-07 05:07:16 +0000 UTC]

But non-addictive pencils just aren't as fun!

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FaithIS In reply to vital-organs [2010-03-07 16:04:41 +0000 UTC]

i'll give ya that one

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kaffable [2010-03-03 17:01:24 +0000 UTC]

I love it

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tokuyama [2010-03-02 15:36:35 +0000 UTC]

Nicely done. Great concept!

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vital-organs In reply to tokuyama [2010-03-02 16:14:42 +0000 UTC]

Thank you.

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tokuyama In reply to vital-organs [2010-03-02 16:41:05 +0000 UTC]

You're welcome!

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DarkestElemental616 [2010-03-02 02:12:26 +0000 UTC]

Your handwriting is way prettier than mine. And far more legible.

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Umbrella-xx [2010-03-01 22:34:33 +0000 UTC]

Your writing, like the poem, is beautiful.
~

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Snehsnow [2010-03-01 22:33:24 +0000 UTC]

I like the metaphor!
Yay for using the proper terms for things!

STOP SNIFFING SHARPIES

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vital-organs In reply to Snehsnow [2010-03-01 22:38:32 +0000 UTC]

I'm not sniffing sharpies! And there isn't glue on my desk either!

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Snehsnow In reply to vital-organs [2010-03-01 23:54:21 +0000 UTC]

of course not~

Anyways
I really do like the poem

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