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tutituderumtu [2013-06-17 16:37:10 +0000 UTC]
You shouldn't jump between 'you' and 'I'. Both those sentences are from Karkat P.O.V.: "I raised an eyebrow at her (...)" "Now you knew she was crazy."
And that story is interesting.
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Viviana098679 In reply to tutituderumtu [2013-06-18 04:01:18 +0000 UTC]
Okay. Thanks again. It's nice for someone to show where I need improvement.
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tutituderumtu In reply to Viviana098679 [2013-06-18 04:42:41 +0000 UTC]
You're welcome.
I always wait for constructive criticism and it never comes. :(
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tutituderumtu In reply to Viviana098679 [2013-06-18 05:15:56 +0000 UTC]
I just would like to know where I did mistakes.
I know they are hiding somewhere out there.
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BlackCat609 [2013-06-15 06:40:14 +0000 UTC]
I love this <3
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lovewolfs100 [2013-06-12 16:58:39 +0000 UTC]
this is awesome ouo
cant wait for the next part~!<3
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MMyntho [2013-06-11 22:18:47 +0000 UTC]
Pert two please
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NovaAutoBotTF [2013-06-11 19:43:30 +0000 UTC]
I need more x3!!
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