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Vividlight — As Tears Go By

Published: 2007-01-16 14:23:38 +0000 UTC; Views: 911; Favourites: 47; Downloads: 37
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Description It is the evening of the day,
I sit and watch the children play.
Smiling faces I can see
But not for me,
I sit and watch as tears go by.

My riches cant buy everything,
I want to hear the children sing.
All I hear is the sound
Of rain falling on the ground,
I sit and watch as tears go by.

It is the evening of the day,
I sit and watch the children play.
Doing things I used to do
They think are new,
I sit and watch as tears go by.


Marianne Faithfull
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Comments: 33

KARAKULEV [2008-04-05 06:47:30 +0000 UTC]

Good!Likes!

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missmarypotter [2008-04-05 04:40:21 +0000 UTC]

This reminds me of the Talisman by Steven King. That's a good thing. I like this loads!

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grandmajudie [2008-04-04 00:37:43 +0000 UTC]

This is awesome and so is the poem. IT just fits. I love it.

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Vividlight In reply to grandmajudie [2008-04-04 00:55:00 +0000 UTC]

Thanks. it was taken Christmas day. I found it sort of strange that so many people would be there.

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grandmajudie In reply to Vividlight [2008-04-04 01:02:42 +0000 UTC]

People do strange things on Christmas. Especially in the warmer climates where you don't have to stay cooped up to stay warm. My parents and I used to go for drives in the desert.( We also did that on Easter and almost every Sun.. My mother just loved to go out in the desert. I don't know what the big deal was. We lived in the desert!

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Zethara [2008-04-01 17:36:03 +0000 UTC]

This one sort of climbed inside... Excellent work

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neverendingXstory [2008-03-31 15:12:13 +0000 UTC]

Gorrrgeous!

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kkart [2007-04-12 13:40:06 +0000 UTC]

This is fantastic! Which pier is this? The tone in this really works something special

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silver-raindrops2000 [2007-03-08 11:07:59 +0000 UTC]

Amazing capture. I love the sad feel of it, and the monochromatic color. Very impressive, the water looks gorgeous.

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Vividlight In reply to silver-raindrops2000 [2007-03-08 18:19:31 +0000 UTC]

Thank you!

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kayceeus [2007-02-08 14:38:26 +0000 UTC]

There used to be a place like this around here called Pacific Ocean Park that had the worlds only all wood roller coaster, ha ha needless to say it's no longer there. Very nice shot, it looks great in black and white.

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Vividlight In reply to kayceeus [2007-02-08 18:14:10 +0000 UTC]

POP? This was taken at Santa Monica Pier. Thank you, I'm glad you liked it.

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kayceeus In reply to Vividlight [2007-02-08 19:06:51 +0000 UTC]

You're probably too young to remember POP but I went there with my parents as a kid. The only thing I remember is seeing all the sailors lined up outside the tattoo parlor waiting to get tattoos!
You know I didn't even know Santa Monica pier had anything like this, I'll have to go check it out sometime.

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Vividlight In reply to kayceeus [2007-02-08 19:30:23 +0000 UTC]

Me and my brother would sneek in under the catwalks and come up in the train ride at the end and stay till they closed then get a ride home in Palms by the security gaurd. I loved the diving bell. I was 12.

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kayceeus In reply to Vividlight [2007-02-08 20:43:29 +0000 UTC]

What fun! In those days you could be 12 and run around after dark without worrying. I think I was around 5 or 6 when I went there. I can only remember a few things about the place although I thought it was magical, in reality I'm sure it was probably very seedy!

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Celestial-SeraphiMan [2007-01-30 02:36:38 +0000 UTC]

Very nice.

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silent-realm [2007-01-29 07:13:35 +0000 UTC]

Beautifully Serene & Mysterious!
Almost Magical In Feeling!

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DestinieKirby [2007-01-27 02:17:21 +0000 UTC]

This has such a dark feeling to it. I love it.

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MyLittleWorld [2007-01-26 23:50:10 +0000 UTC]

Great shot!

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zardo [2007-01-26 08:11:46 +0000 UTC]

excellent shot !

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AllieDis [2007-01-24 01:03:50 +0000 UTC]

an interesting and unusual angle ...very nice

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SilverWaves [2007-01-23 23:24:07 +0000 UTC]

this is so gorgeous

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silencedesreves [2007-01-17 20:46:58 +0000 UTC]

together we stand alone...

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suchafool [2007-01-17 11:29:13 +0000 UTC]

very nice.love the colors

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torxx21 [2007-01-16 23:43:23 +0000 UTC]

Excellent shot, Ed.... my eyes keep being led to the people on the pier... I want to know what the cyclists are looking at! Well done....

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Vividlight In reply to torxx21 [2007-01-17 01:20:34 +0000 UTC]

Thank you my friend. Your feedback is much appreciated.

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flondo [2007-01-16 14:30:59 +0000 UTC]

no possible confusion
Beautiful work as always

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Vividlight In reply to flondo [2007-01-16 14:33:59 +0000 UTC]

Thank you.

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Wozzles [2007-01-16 14:27:44 +0000 UTC]

this is beautiful, what pier is it?

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Vividlight In reply to Wozzles [2007-01-16 14:34:18 +0000 UTC]

Santa Monica

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Wozzles In reply to Vividlight [2007-01-16 14:43:01 +0000 UTC]

arh, the only pier near me is the brighton one. ah well,its amazing mate. well done

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Vividlight In reply to Wozzles [2007-01-16 17:51:57 +0000 UTC]

Thank you!

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Wozzles In reply to Vividlight [2007-01-16 21:48:36 +0000 UTC]

a pleasure

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