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VixartStudios — Afriel aged up
Published: 2018-06-29 04:32:46 +0000 UTC; Views: 202; Favourites: 34; Downloads: 0
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So this is Afriel aged up But now he is 20 years old.
If you want to read his bio and see his younger self go here:
LINK: www.deviantart.com/vixartstudi…
That's it for now and I do dearly hope you like this drawing
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Comments: 4
This is an awesome design, I especially like the colors you used; however the linework does start to look fairly unclean when zooming in. Because you have a simple cartoony style, it doesn't work well with the piece. Its easy to see where you erased the ends of the fur in an attempt to make them look sharp; you can fix this by erasing in a way that looks like the the thin, sharp part of the line is gradually going into the thicc part, or if you have a tablet that allows you to use pen pressure, you can press down lightly at the tips of the fur and bare down harder as the line continues. Your lines are also the tiniest bit wobbly, you can fix this by going back and simply cleaning up the lines, or you can make quicker strokes. I thought a bit of constructive criticism would help you improve at a faster rate. I look forward to seeing where your art goes in the future. :0)
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From a matter of perspective, I would kill for linework this clean
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Ok I understand where you are coming from and I really apreciate the cirtique, I'll be sure to work on improving my art more.
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But overall frickin awsome piece, and all of your art in general is frickin awesome.
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